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Maganius
Maganius
It says NOT FOUND =(
Bilal Khan
Bilal Khan
Oh wait .
Bilal Khan
Bilal Khan
Check this link . :)
Maganius
Maganius
Great Essay love it but the ending seems unsatisfactory
i'll suggest you add some more material in the conclusion and make it more compelling okay :)
over all its awesome ^^
Maganius
Maganius
when i was reading your essay it seemed interesting and wel written but when i read the conclusion i felt its not complete.
Bilal Khan
Bilal Khan
I know , it was above the word limit that's why . .;)
Maganius
Maganius
oh okay it would be better if you cut off some points in second last paragraph and add some words in the conclusion :)
Bilal Khan
Bilal Khan
Thanx bro !! :D
I really needed feedback ! (Y)
Maganius
Maganius
Np ^^ and good luck mate(Y)
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Fayax555
Great work, bor.
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Fayax555
bro*
Maganius
Maganius
=) mate no need to correct your mistakes ^^
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Fayax555
hmm ok.
But what would happen if I do not correct that mistake.
Bilal Khan
Bilal Khan
Thanx , Fayaz . ;)
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