Sahar F. Qasim

Hello miss,
I am taking A2 and I saw a post where you mentioned that you are teaching English Language. I was wondering whether you could check one of my sample answers to provide feedback as I don't have a teacher. Thanks in advance.

Hi Ma’am. I saw your thread stating that you are English Language Teacher 9093 AL.
Ma’am I needed help regarding solving papers. I have pp on 2nd and idk anything how the paper is attempted.
I appeared in 2016 M/J, had a tutor who made me practice one month and he was confident that i’ll score an A but I scored small e.