A moot ENG language point(2014 May/June)

[M.Omar]

yep comes in service all the way

How did ur ppr go,talking abt eng
And yeah hope u fared well in the other ppr;How did it go;Easy/typical/a bit difficult.,talking abt history(the same day)

 

[Awesome12]

Manager,s too busy or too VIP-ish.
Wht do u do now

 

[funky brat]

Dunno.I did both,i advised him to rehire some waiters,check the food etc,and i told him to give me a refund.Doesnt matter that much though but i think it said what would you like him to do.

We just had to tell him kay hamara jo even barbad kia hai uska kya karna hai. Uskay elava uska boss nahi banna tha.

 

[soyknbro]

The theme given for the letter was most definitely too easy. I've no doubt most individuals will receive great marks if the tasks given were fulfilled. The only confusion that was to be made was the distinction between restaurant food and "service."; However, the food quality is part of the service offered by the staff. The definition of service itself, is doing work for someone else. This would by its definition include preparing a specific meal at the customers behest. The chefs in particular preparing the food, so if you wrote about the poor food, you should in theory be fine.

The only other confusion I'm not entirely certain about is whether poor facilities are included when we talk about, "poor service." e.g faulty generators, elevators, chairs, lights, etc.

When I wrote the paper myself, I too had this small confusion and avoided food altogether (Apart from the main disaster of the evening. The cake we had called for in advance).

I feel that many of us went a similar if not the exact route for the occasion (Reason of Celebration). Ours or one of our loved ones birthday. Poor service and/or food and finally full compensation in the form of a refund or free meal. It is in the last point that I think many others and I made the margin of error. Instead of compensation (and keeping in the theme of politeness) we should have instead advised the manager to improve the faults given. I.E, "Please wash the plates properly before handing them to us for use.", "Please provide optional plastic spoons," "Please provide forks!"

Well anyway, this is just my own analysis that I do for every paper I write. This is after all just O-level so we'll all pass with good structure, fulfillment of tasks and little to no grammatical issues.

 

[Hamza_Akmal]

I think that points should have been as follows:
bullet 1: whatever
bullet 2:
-poor quality food
-late arrival of order
-staff misconduct
-they disturbed privacy
-food served cold and u found a lizard in it
-plates weren't washed
-waiter's misbehaved by arguing
etc
bullet 3:
-please hire new staff
-improve hygiene
-hire a health inspector
-add chefs
etc.

 

[fazlovelfc]

Also employ trained staff !

 

[Taha Noman]

Guys guys guys! The question required us to start with dear sir,
What if one gave the whole address and all? How many marks will be deducted? Arghh

 

[funky brat]

Guys guys guys! The question required us to start with dear sir,
What if one gave the whole address and all? How many marks will be deducted? Arghh

That's what I did. I've asked many people, everybody says we were not supposed to write the address except one or two who disagree. Well, this is directed writing so we had to follow the instructions, I think 2-3 will be deducted.

 

[asadalam]

That's what I did. I've asked many people, everybody says we were not supposed to write the address except one or two who disagree. Well, this is directed writing so we had to follow the instructions, I think 2-3 will be deducted.

Yar dont worry,examiners dont care about such trivial details!Address or no address it is the content of your letter that will be marked!

 

[zaccy zac]

I wrote a story on Topic I will always remember sign of amazement and relief on my father's face.
I wrote a very simple story and now i am worried that i haven't used high vocabulary and expressions.I wrote simple but without mistakes........

 

[asadalam]

I wrote a story on Topic I will always remember sign of amazement and relief on my father's face.
I wrote a very simple story and now i am worried that i haven't used high vocabulary and expressions.I wrote simple but without mistakes........

Acha bhai,wrote a story on axio : P

 

[funky brat]

I wrote a story on Topic I will always remember sign of amazement and relief on my father's face.
I wrote a very simple story and now i am worried that i haven't used high vocabulary and expressions.I wrote simple but without mistakes........

If your grammar is perfect, and sentence structure is fine then it's okay. I didn't even use bog words. I don't know but I find compositions more interesting that are simple yet the style is attractive.

 

[funky brat]

Yar dont worry,examiners dont care about such trivial details!Address or no address it is the content of your letter that will be marked!

I think I should not get the mark, so that I learn a lesson to read the full question.

 

[asadalam]

I think I should not get the mark, so that I learn a lesson to read the full question.

Tumhari marzi bhai :/

 

[funky brat]

Tumhari marzi bhai :/

 

[Taha Noman]

Don't worry guys. One has to be seriously bad at English to screw his/her English grade. Most of the people I know who have decent English got an A or an A*. Chill guys

 

[Taha Noman]

I think I should not get the mark, so that I learn a lesson to read the full question.

I think I should get a high mark. So that my overall grade isn't ruined just because of a silly little mistake.

 

[funky brat]

I think I should get a high mark. So that my overall grade isn't ruined just because of a silly little mistake.

Well, it's just a mark. If you're good enough you'll get an A* or A otherwise.

 

[FLRNAB]

Yar dont worry,examiners dont care about such trivial details!Address or no address it is the content of your letter that will be marked!

Trivial? There is something called Task Fulfillment?

 

[Talha Farooqui BSS]

i wrp

Well just skimming over the topic,I think the poor service aspet in restaurant question does not imply the food;it may of course include catering style but not exactly food.I have gone thru many websites to define customer service and all tht in a restaurant and they have essentially discriminated food and service,often by an oft repeated phrase like:Customer wud come to restaurant for food but they will return due to the service" and u can surf urself this topic to clarify .Wht do U guys reckon,I mean it,s a firm content point for bullet 2 and 3.
http://smallbusiness.chron.com/examples-good-service-restaurant-industry-38058.html
U can surf more if u deem it necessary.

i wrte smthng abt ac's, incmplete no.of dishes ordered, melted cakes, uncooked food, standby generators nt there, lizard found in cake, i hope this one was persuasive