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oops i mixed your avatar with someone else :O the story on the first page, i thought it was yoursBut I didn't write any story...mine's a poem
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oops i mixed your avatar with someone else :O the story on the first page, i thought it was yoursBut I didn't write any story...mine's a poem
Never mind! It's alright brotheroops i mixed your avatar with someone else :O the story on the first page, i thought it was yours
Mother of great writings. This is just pure iasisfnfiuafiusdifusdgukjfdndI’m laying in the bed,
thinking of the last time I made a mistake
The clock struck midnight and I’m dreaming again,
‘I’m running down the stairs, I trip and fall,
a dark shadow standing behind me like a pitfall,
I try to stand back, but someone holds my hand…
As I turn back…’
It’s morning again.
the alarm’s screamin’, insane
and that touch remains a mystery, a pain.
I’ve been through the darkness of the light,
Fell so bad from such a height,
You laughed at me, tried to invade me,
But I love it baby, and now u’ll see what I used to be
Hey! Hello! Are u talking to me?
Remember the first time we met,
U said I was a freak,
But wait haha, what do u mean?
Just cause I’ vent got a Ferrari, is that what u see?
I’m trying to overcome these forces
I’m sick and tired of making messes.
I aint no Tony Stark, owning a weapons-industry
I can’t even use a gun, yet they call him ‘iron man’ and me ‘terrorist’?
Mama told me, go and chase what u want
But I aint no millionaire, I gotta play it hard
And now im here, fighting with my siblings in the backyard
Shit! This can’t be real, I broke my bruv’s arm.
You haters look at me,
Like im a spinning coin,
I spend everyday, so lazy,
Like im on Heroin
Deep inside are buried the cruel secrets of my life
They can’t tell from my face if I’ll be able to fight
‘Cause even Batman wears a mask until you realize
It’s Bruce Wayne in a suit o f a knight!
When the dark force rises
The sun goes and hide,
Until the right time arrives
then the light stabs the evil with a knife!
Brandy skinny stretched up,
I get outa my chevy,
They say check out that chick, She’s got a cool ride
Now what u say baby?
I thought u said im nothing?
Haha, but when u’re done hating,
Dial 999, call my home, I’ll be waiting!
Written By Komal Azam aka AlishaK
I just randomly wrote now. flaminheroes Esme
On your Request. Not my best thou.
Cheers!
LOL!!!! What the heck was that? XDMother of great writings. This is just pure iasisfnfiuafiusdifusdgukjfdnd
You're psycho!The Laptop fell while i was writing that lol (i'm kidding, i just started banging on my keyboard to express how awesome that writing was.)
oops i mixed your avatar with someone else :O the story on the first page, i thought it was yours
LOL! U do mean it eh?! Anyhow, kalsjkhdnkjlfhkaghkjs;hnlkdgjmMother of great writings. This is just pure iasisfnfiuafiusdifusdgukjfdnd
ahhaha....thanks, that's my friends' nicky. thanks anyway!This is beautiful. I could see my username innit!
http://www.wattpad.com/17465685-unreal-description#.UZ6IFDdQ-H8, I want you to read this! I dont know if u were referring to me abt the ms doc. But whatever u r such a good writer and i want you to tell me/guide me too. Ur opinions matter. And even thou i did not read the whole thing, i deffo will when i get time cause i know it'll be great!! DDDDDWell was just going through the past posts. Seems like a lot of people like writing here
downloaded your story and realised i don't have microsoft word. the woes of reinstalling OS.
thanks well i went through it, and i liked the tone of the first few lines. But the "ummmm okay" part and after it kinda tinted the whole air. You were writing in a majestic way, it would have sounded better if you had continued on like that. Maybe you should tell that part at the end, beneath your signature or something like that, just so that the reader knows what is the general theme of the story. I'd like to read the story thoughhttp://www.wattpad.com/17465685-unreal-description#.UZ6IFDdQ-H8, I want you to read this! I dont know if u were referring to me abt the ms doc. But whatever u r such a good writer and i want you to tell me/guide me too. Ur opinions matter. And even thou i did not read the whole thing, i deffo will when i get time cause i know it'll be great!! DDDDD
Cheers!
Jazak Allah khair.
You write too, don't you? Why don't you share your stuff here ?
Thanks, cheers!thanks well i went through it, and i liked the tone of the first few lines. But the "ummmm okay" part and after it kinda tinted the whole air. You were writing in a majestic way, it would have sounded better if you had continued on like that. Maybe you should tell that part at the end, beneath your signature or something like that, just so that the reader knows what is the general theme of the story. I'd like to read the story though
I can think so many plots but when it comes to writing them down, i loose all will of doing any such thing. Still, i have something to share. It is a creation myth, which i abandoned cuz i did not like it very much. (working on another one now ) Do read it if anyone gets the time
http://storywrite.com/story/10120277-Of_the_Heavens-by-Fantasymaniac
I can think so many plots but when it comes to writing them down, i loose all will of doing any such thing. Still, i have something to share. It is a creation myth, which i abandoned cuz i did not like it very much. (working on another one now ) Do read it if anyone gets the time
http://storywrite.com/story/10120277-Of_the_Heavens-by-Fantasymaniac
hehehehe thanks very much Yup Tolkien ftw I am working on another scenario now, abandoned this one though i might use it later.Wow!! I only read the first 6 paragraphs..haven't got time right now but you're really really very good. It doesn't look like it's been written by an amateur!! I like your style of writing and you've got a creative imagination! I seriously mean it!
And if I'm not wrong, Tolkein inspired you to write this ?
that's a good piece of writing I like it. Would only suggest to divide it in paragraphs, the rest is great
hehehehe thanks very much Yup Tolkien ftw I am working on another scenario now, abandoned this one though i might use it later.
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