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Can you guys please post your short stories here? :) I need help in english language!

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Not really and English Improving thingy but really heart touching:

There was a blind girl who hated herself just because she was blind. She hated everyone, except her loving boyfriend. He was always there for her. She said that if she could only see the world, she would marry her boyfriend.
One day, someone donated a pair of eyes to her and then she could see everything, including her boyfriend. Her boyfriend asked her, “now that you can see the world, will you marry me?”
The girl was shocked when she saw that her boyfriend was blind too, and refused to marry him. Her boyfriend walked away in tears, and later wrote a letter to her saying:
“Just take care of my eyes dear.”
 
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[quote="Sarah., post: 19

sure !!
i guess the main thing for english creative is to be really descriptive and know what your talking about, meaning stick to the topic :)
 

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