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I would help but sorry cant read all that much! 
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Well I am at chapter 4 right now and I have to say that I really like the story
it got me very interested to know where the story leads I really liked it, your sister is such a wonderful writer and she uses her words perfectly to blend in with the story.. I advise her to mind her punctuation, because in the chapters that I have read so far, she seems to be mis-using her punctuations such as comma, full stop etc.And she needs to check her work once again, the way she frames her sentences excellent Masha Allah but she needs to view her mistakes once again, im not saying change the whole story.. but just keep a look out for little errors like:
The sixth music period was I enjoyed most but today it was drag too
She could change it to: The sixth period was music, I really enjoyed it but today it was a total drag.
or she can change the sentence to whatever she likes
She should continue writing this story, I really liked it and I cant wait to read it all
Well I am at chapter 4 right now and I have to say that I really like the story
And she needs to check her work once again, the way she frames her sentences excellent Masha Allah but she needs to view her actumistakes once again, im not saying change the whole story.. but just keep a look out for little errors like:
The sixth music period was I enjoyed most but today it was drag too
She could change it to: The sixth period was music, I really enjoyed it but today it was a total drag.
or she can change the sentence to whatever she likes
She should continue writing this story, I really liked it and I cant wait to read it all
thank u so much 4 reading.... and she's glad u liked it. it was actually her 3rd try. the 1st two got deleted when we installed the new window, she just wrote it real fast and uploaded it 2 avoid such thing. thax 4 the d advice...
thank u so much 4 reading.... and she's glad u liked it. it was actually her 3rd try. the 1st two got deleted when we installed the new window, she just wrote it real fast and uploaded it 2 avoid such thing. thax 4 the d advice...
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