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Bhai doesnt like changing user names. Probably gonna ignore u he is but change avvy atleastSuree!
Haha contact Badrobot And your avatar's too old, khuda k wastay change it!
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Bhai doesnt like changing user names. Probably gonna ignore u he is but change avvy atleastSuree!
Haha contact Badrobot And your avatar's too old, khuda k wastay change it!
Happens with me all the time It's the sole reason why I shifted to short stories
15 Whole chapters? That's like, ALOT of work :O
I see. Inspirations ended up on me. Y dun u write to inspire me?
Bhai doesnt like changing user names. Probably gonna ignore u he is but change avvy atleast
I have written a story, sometime back. I'll post it Thought you were good enough to inspire others, tabhi din't post itI see. Inspirations ended up on me. Y dun u write to inspire me?
Bhai means brother.I like the username haha, and the 321 parts means "Always armed and ready to take off, like get set, on your marks, gooooo!" What is bhai BTW? I only see Usama and 321 there!
Bhai means brother.
No its for taimoorIs this for me mate? Don't fully understand the second part of the sentence :X!
And im not mate -_-
Lol, never thought of it that way xDI like the username haha, and the 321 parts means "Always armed and ready to take off, like get set, on your marks, gooooo!" What is bhai BTW? I only see Usama and 321 there!
was that for me? I'm confused due to the quoteBhai doesnt like changing user names. Probably gonna ignore u he is but change avvy atleast
Lol, never thought of it that way xD
Anyway, that's another good chapter there
Though there are some minor things, like there is supposed to be a timer on a grenade, it doesn't explode on hitting something. The way you have written it sounds a bit odd.
One thing that i find odd is how come the mother is still with the government, even after the death of her child Anyway, i hope you'll put some light on this soon.
chill hunzHmmm I think you don't know the other meanings of mate.
Mate: is an informal and friendly term of address to a stranger.
But, if you took offense, I will remove the post.
yo browas that for me? I'm confused due to the quote
Go back to the start, you'll find amazing stories from everyone^ Amazing description and imagery and a brilliant anti climax... Way to go, bro!
Ma Shaa Allah, u write amazing broWritten sometime back. Hope its good
The room lit with moonlight as she swayed the curtain to the side, facing the full moon that shone in the midst of grey clouds. The night felt magical, a strange quiet whistling filled the atmosphere where each star portrayed the north star, shining with its utmost potential. Her weak existence could do nothing but feel, her glittering eyes could only watch what was to befall. She felt helpless, but atleast she felt the life around her, those endless grasslands, faint glimmer of sea far away and the cold breeze that gently caressed her hand. She hoped someone might rescue her, save her life. But she knew nobody would. It wasn't a fairy tale, or was it? A faint glimmer in the sky far away caught her attention. Her hope grew stronger. The silver object turned its path towards the window, behind which a girl stood hoping for another chance. She could feel it coming, an angel, a saviour. She was saved. She closed her eyes, inhaled the magical atmosphere, and shouted like never "This is my Fairytale!". With wings stretched like a pegasus, the plane crashed right into the house. Sure it wasn't a fairy tale.
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