Song composing... =)

[krazer36]

So anyone here who composes his/her own songs? It can be lyrics or the music or anything regarding that. I wrote many but I always lost them. Hoping that by making this thread maybe we can work together and make one great song!

 

[..sacrifice4Revenge..]

 

[Iridescent]

 

[krazer36]

And that was regarding??

@7 domination

 

[Iridescent]

And that was regarding??

@7 domination

Pretty obvious that he didn't like the idea of composing songs

 

[krazer36]

Pretty obvious that he didn't like the idea of composing songs

Not necessarily, it can be that he doesn't compose .. One can't know what the other is thinking!
Unless you have telepathic powers

 

[Iridescent]

Not necessarily, it can be that he doesn't compose .. One can't know what the other is thinking!
Unless you have telepathic powers

he doesn't compose cz "he doesnot like the idea of composing"(i guess)

 

[krazer36]

he doesn't compose cz "he doesnot like the idea of composing"(i guess)

Haha probably!

 

[Rmarie-yum]

I DO! I DO! i DO!!
tell me what you think
the song will sound better with my voice+piano
read slowly and youll get it
hope you like it

i tick and tock and all my tears are falling,keep falling
left and right and blood on my wall is dripping,keeps dripping
up and down. i cant touch the ground
back and forth and still no sound
but honestly i dont need a GPS
i been told to go through so many directions

some people tell me give up and go back
some people tell me have hope and climb up
but how can i do it when people keep holding me down??

IVE BEEN lost around the world
people just think of me as just another girl (woah)
i try and try to make people happy
but i guess im not that perfect
so what ifi try?
do i just drop my bags and turn around?

some people tell me give up and go back
some people tell me have hope and climb up
but how can i do it when people keep holding me down??

nOrth,south people pull me down
east,west people light me up
north,south people throw me out
east,west people laugh out loud
so many people so many doubts
up,down cant touch the ground
back,forth not a single sound

i tick and tock and all my tears are falling,keep falling
left and right and blood on my wall is dripping,keeps dripping
is there somewhere for me in this world?
holding on but wana shut down
cant i go east to west
without going to north and south
all my life ive been told to go through so many directions.........
cant i go wherever i ant without any consequences?

some people tell me give up and go back
some people tell me have hope and climb up
but how can i do it when people keep holding me down?? (have to hold me down)

someday ill face a new direction
someday ill see a brighter light
maybe a place for me
without people telling me where i have to go
i dont wana go up and down
not back and forth for people throw me out
east and west cant pull me up just hold me

tears may fall and i go down
bood will drip without a sound
but all i wana do
is go where i wana go
be where i wana be
without some people telling me where i have to go

 

[Stancy Motha]

I DO! I DO! i DO!!
tell me what you think
the song will sound better with my voice+piano
read slowly and youll get it
hope you like it

wat...r u serious u HOPE we lik it??
I it...if u can record it n post wen u get time do so...I bet it will sound gud...
u r gifted man!!

 

[krazer36]

I DO! I DO! i DO!!

Wow this is really nice! But err have you tried singing it? It seems kind of long, I mean longer than people actually prefer listening to. Not that I am complaining just asking

 

[paridhi shobhana]

1. yo students​

   i am singing song​

   Chemistry song​

   flop song​

   why this chemistry chemistry di​

   why this chemistry chemistry di​

   rhythm correct​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   maintain please​

   why this chemistry.di​

   distance la paper paper​

   paper-u color-u white-u​

   white background night-u nigth-u​

   night-u color-u black-u​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   white skin-u paper -u paper-u​

   paper-u print out black-u​

   eyes-u eyes-u question meet-u​

   my future dark​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   Google mera notes lalo aur mera doudts bhi kar lo​

   pa pa paan pa pa paan pa pa paa pa pa paan​

   ache sey batao​

   super goggle ready​

   ready 1 2 3 4​

   whaa wat a change over google​

   ok goggle now tune change-u​

   hath mey pen​

   only english..​

   hand la pen​

   pen la refill​

   eyes-u full-aa tear-u​

   empty brain​

   friend-u come-u​

   life reverse gear-u​

   friend friend​

   oh ma friend​

   you showed me answer​

   sir-u sir-u oh ma sir-u​

   i want u hear now-u​

   god i m dying now-u​

   he is happy how-u​

   this song for soup studen​

   ​

 

[paridhi shobhana]

1. ​
   yo students​
   i am singing song​
   Chemistry song​
   flop song​
   why this chemistry chemistry di​
   why this chemistry chemistry di​
   rhythm correct​
   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​
   maintain please​
   why this chemistry.di​
   distance la paper paper​
   paper-u color-u white-u​
   white background night-u nigth-u​
   night-u color-u black-u​
   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​
   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​
   white skin-u paper -u paper-u​
   paper-u print out black-u​
   eyes-u eyes-u question meet-u​
   my future dark​
   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​
   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​
   Google mera notes lalo aur mera doudts bhi kar lo​
   pa pa paan pa pa paan pa pa paa pa pa paan​
   ache sey batao​
   super goggle ready​
   ready 1 2 3 4​
   whaa wat a change over google​
   ok goggle now tune change-u​
   hath mey pen​
   only english..​
   hand la pen​
   pen la refill​
   eyes-u full-aa tear-u​
   empty brain​
   friend-u come-u​
   life reverse gear-u​
   friend friend​
   oh ma friend​
   you showed me answer​
   sir-u sir-u oh ma sir-u​
   i want u hear now-u​
   god i m dying now-u​
   he is happy how-u​
   this song for soup studen​

diz was already posted bt didnt gt much reples diz is one of the i have composed ( remake of why diz kolaveri di ) hope u ppl like it i have another one bt let me see how is this now

 

[Rmarie-yum]

thank you so much
i was so shy on posting iyt because i thought everyone would ate it
but your 0pinion means the world to me
i have more
and thankyou 4 all your compliments
keeps me motivated
thankyoou

 

[Rmarie-yum]

i know its long
but i wish you could hear me sing+piano
its really catchy
its only long because the ay i wrote it
thankyou 4 your opinion and ill try to work on that
thankyou

 

[krazer36]

diz was already posted bt didnt gt much reples diz is one of the i have composed ( remake of why diz kolaveri di ) hope u ppl like it i have another one bt let me see how is this now

Lol this is nice but sorry I don't like Kolveri Di or anything related to it ... Not that I'm saying I didn't like it!

i know its long

Haha No problem =D Why don't you record it like some one else said and then we'll be able to tell better!

 

[paridhi shobhana]

I hate u
u hate me
we will go to new zealand
and we will study ABC

We will stay their happily
i will study , u will study
i will pass nd u will fail
not like u a stupid gul

i will go, u will go
i will go to ma country
and u will go to garbage bin
where ppl throw throw stupid things


Made this song wen i was 13 so dnt mind it being silly lolxz

 

[krazer36]

Made this song wen i was 13 so dnt mind it being silly lolxz

Haha awww cute Lol but why throw the poor person in garbage ? haha

 

[paridhi shobhana]

Haha awww cute Lol but why throw the poor person in garbage ? haha

lol didnt get any idea at dat tym

 

[Stancy Motha]

robinhoodmustafa -lol...soo sorry 4 being soo l8!!

as requested TITLE=Y RoBiN

Hey Mr.Robin!
Opposite of boring
Overflowing awesomeness
Totally is bottomless

Y (then) Robin?
Did u crush that soul?
Did u lose control?
Was that u'r goal?
like- All a-long?

Worry not 4 we 4give n 4get
Once u show some regret

Now it's u'r Birthday so live it up
Hopin u got a gift better than an egg-cup

Challenges may build up and stand in u'r way
But don't u dare of think of backin away
Face them, n fight them
And gr8 mem's cherish them!

Sorry but that's all I got...

HaPpY bIrThDaY!!!