Poetry! =P

[étudiante]

kk dis isnt one of my best....bt wateva!

I'm going to make a painful confesion:
. . .
It's what binds me to my lonely solitude, for now and forever.....

wat do u mean by isnt one of ur best? its AMAZING!!!!!!!!! Mashallah

 

[Dashing Cancerian]

Heres my masterpiece:

Na kar nahi nahi, ye waqt nahi nahi ka
Tere isi nahi nahi ne, mujhay chora nahi kahin ka!

Jinko samajh aye... mujhhay b samjha daen!

nyc hai...

 

[iFuz]

nyc hai...

Shukariya! ^_^

 

[whitetiger64]

wat do u mean by isnt one of ur best? its AMAZING!!!!!!!!! Mashallah

*blush* thnx!

 

[étudiante]

*blush* thnx!

ur welcome

 

[Stancy Motha]

kk dis isnt one of my best....bt wateva!

I'm going to make a painful confesion:
It's what binds me to my lonely solitude, for now and forever.....

I luv the way u rite it...lik it's a peice of cake...every sentence fits in perfectly...
it's Fantastic & Fabulous=fantabulous
I'll be waitin 4 more...

 

[whitetiger64]

I luv the way u rite it...lik it's a peice of cake...every sentence fits in perfectly...
it's Fantastic & Fabulous=fantabulous
I'll be waitin 4 more...

Thnx sooo much!!!! Trust me i dnt write well at all....i mean it takes aaaages for me to get sum worthy lines!!! But i luuvv writing so it keeps me going
I'm suure they will be more cuz NOTHING can stop me writing! Im waiting for sum of yours too!!

 

[Stancy Motha]

Thnx sooo much!!!! Trust me i dnt write well at all....i mean it takes aaaages for me to get sum worthy lines!!! But i luuvv writing so it keeps me going
I'm suure they will be more cuz NOTHING can stop me writing! Im waiting for sum of yours too!!

LOL me??thought u would have 4gotten bout me...lmao I just noticed I can only write wen I am sad....that's y all my poems sound depressin...they reflect my emotions...I wrote lik 3 sets...but I want to make changes so will post aftr exams...(the best of my abilities 4 u ppl...) cuz u guys r soo encouraging...I will not take that 4 granted..

btw I luv this part of u'r poem....

kk dis isnt one of my best....bt wateva!
I'm sorry for having you fall in this trap
I'm sorry for every time I'd lash out and snap
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[Amaya]

ChEMistry!!!!​

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An atom and a molecule​

An element and a compound​

I sat there like a fool​

Hoping no more would be found​

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John's ruled the world of chemistry​

Newland's, Doberinger, Dalton...​

How they like it is an even​

bigger mystery​

Working day and night​

did they ever see the sun??​

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Sir Menfdeleev and elements are​

great friends!!!​

found upto 63​

'set up new trends​

Now a 117, we do see​

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Proton and electron​

Positive and Negative​

Neutral is the neutron​

Aaah! my mind is a like a sieve​

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Non metals & metals​

acids and alkalis​

makes me a mental​

Its a wonderi'm still fine!​

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Evaporation & condensation​

Solids, liquids & gases​

Boiling, melting & distillation​

All this scare away the masses!​

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Watching how to use a pipette​

Makes my brain go hazy​

Working with a burette​

Truly make me crazy​

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So when i learn chemistry​

I really feel like sleeping​

For it is like talking about a mysetery​

& sometimes sets me weeping​

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I feel like running away​

And playing in the sun​

'time, please run,'is all i can say​

As i wait for class to be done...​

​

- whitetiger64​

 

[étudiante]

^ Chemmy hater?

 

[étudiante]

noo its not me...how will i hate chemistry!!!??? it was those days of ignorance which made me hate chem...now i can think abt me writing sth lyk dis abt chem...okay anyway i dint write the poem completely..it was my frnds (hu hate chem)

yeah u told me i was telling dem
My chemmy baby haters gonna hate

 

[Amaya]

noo its not me...how will i hate chemistry!!!??? it was those days of ignorance which made me hate chem...now i can think abt me writing sth lyk dis abt chem...okay anyway i dint write the poem completely..it was my frnds (hu hate chem)

thnxxx i kno u will understand me..
hope my frnds read this poem..

 

[Amaya]

kk dis isnt one of my best....bt wateva!

I'm going to make a painful confesion:
I have a kind of complex, a dreadful affliction
Let me tell you how it takes place
Every time I make friends with a new face
We have lots of fun and joke together
But the moment, they try to get a little closer
The disease begins to work in it's awful way
Making me push them further away
Suddenly I feel annoyed with their presence
And every time they talk, up comes my defence
Until they learn to keep their distance
And then I'm back with my own existence
This viscious cycle goes round again
Inflicting those I love with pain
I'm sorry for having you fall in this trap
I'm sorry for every time I'd lash out and snap
I'm sorry for the times your heart felt my knife
I can't control this syndrome that runs my life
It's what makes a best friend for me, a 'never'
It's what binds me to my lonely solitude, for now and forever.....

tiger u have improveddddd alot!!! simply itself u r aawesome at writing !!!!!
i am secret admirer of ur poems...

 

[MuslimGirl]

noo its not me...how will i hate chemistry!!!??? it was those days of ignorance which made me hate chem...now i can think abt me writing sth lyk dis abt chem...okay anyway i dint write the poem completely..it was my frnds (hu hate chem)

yeah u told me i was telling dem
My chemmy baby haters gonna hate

*off-topiC*

 

[étudiante]

*off-topiC*

we stopped it
sholly! couldnt resist saying abt my chemmy

 

[étudiante]

wat do u mean>>?? sorry can understand....
u r a chemmy hater or lover??

LOVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!! "
i mean i cldnt resist commenting on that cuz it was against chemmy
(neway... PM )

 

[Amaya]

tiger u have improveddddd alot!!! simply itself u r aawesome at writing !!!!!
i am secret admirer of ur poems...

tigerz great man!!!

 

[MuslimGirl]

we stopped it
sholly! couldnt resist saying abt my chemmy

i cn understand
me have same feelings for urdu

 

[étudiante]

i kno u r a lover...i askd muslim girl if she was a lover or a hater////
neither can i resist sth against chem!

my bad! i thot it was for me
cuz u quoted me i guess....

 

[Amaya]

My all-time fav!!!

thank you guys!!!! i wanted u ppl to see this poem...