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where you got those expressions which you distributed in the class.......
k here r some expressions that might help u in ur compositions
k here r some expressions that might help u in ur compositions
Anger: bellowed, arms akinbo, boiling with rage, sleething with fury, fuming, like a mad bull
Jealousy: cattish, sneering, felt outwitted, green eyed monster, hell has no fury than a woman scorned
Disappointed: down in the dumps, crestfallen. thwarted, down hearted
Happy: over the moon, pleased as pink, tickled pink
Sadness: blinked back the tears, cried like a baby, shattered, lost in the darkness
Embarrasment: voice stuck in my throat, sometimes holes in the ground just aren't big enough to swallow your shame, felt hot and cold
i liked them all
np I'll add some more whn I get some timeohh amazing well thanks a lot
Well, your question isn't all that clear, but here's my attempt at answering it.
A writer must remember while writing a story be that narrative, situational, descriptive or any of the other mode of writing, that your job as a writer is to show, not tell. This means describing the events in such a way that a picture is created in the reader's mind. Hence, using general adjectives like 'lovely', 'beautiful' etc makes your account sound hollow and incomplete.
Now coming about the emotions you just mentioned, here's how I would put them in a story so that the reader effectively and successfully understands what I'm trying to convey.
Anger : As Mark learnt the truth about his mother's murder, his ears flared up and his face became flushed. The tightening of his jaw and fists, along with the darkened sky, and his deadly glare, was enough to make the convicts understand that they weren't getting out of there alive.
Love : Looking at her daughter after about 5 years of separation, Katie's eyes lit up and tears of joy ran down her cheeks. Holding her in her arms, Katie felt alive, as though a lost part of her heart was intact again. The moment was too precious for words to explain, and Katie finally passed a smile, a faint one, but a smile after all.
Hate : As Jonathan eyed his arch-rivals arrival, his eyes filled with a mixture of abhorrence and pride. He walked towards him, and shook hands, not a hand of friendship but of the initiation of a cold-war.
Guilt : Freddy's eyes were scanning the floor as if he was looking for a black hole to get sucked into. Sweat ran down his forehead and dampened his palms, as his master approached him for he was guilty as charged for robbery. As the master stood right in front of him, Freddy could not bring himself to look him straight in the eyes, so he lowered himself down to his master's feet and begged for forgiveness.
Excitement : Little Emily's eyes sparkled as she eyed the big box wrapped in pink paper, which was a gift from her mommy and daddy on her 7th birthday. She could hardly wait to get her hands onto the box, and as soon as her mommy allowed her, she tore apart the wrapping sheet to discover the doll she had wanted since the previous year. Delighted, Emily's cheeks became rosy and she hugged her parents tightly.
I just came up with these right now, I hope they'd help you create some of your own, so that your story can have a polished touch. Good luck.
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you must love writing 'X' instead of an 'E'
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