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Hello Everyone! :)
As promised, here's the thread for the English tips for Argumentative, Descriptive and One Word Essays.
I've collected material from various resources plus points from the examiner reports/syllabus. I hope that this thread will help you.

Argumentative Essays:
- Read the topic carefully. Underline the main point of the topic (such as Politics).
- Decide 'for' or 'against' (i.e. are you in favour or against?).
- Jot down all the RELEVANT & LOGICAL points related to your opinion. Spend 5-10 minutes doing this in the form of notes. No emotional reasons should be included. As we say don't be "jazbaati".
- Starting - No quotes are needed; some books/resources will tell you to state your opinion at the start or by the end. In the paper, state it at the BEGINNING of your essay, most preferably in the opening paragraph.
- Manners in which you can start the essay:
(i) Ease into the topic then generally give your opinion. For example: "The trend of social media has greatly increased over the last four years. Nowadays, it has become a necessity for teenagers. I personally believe ........"
(ii) Start directly by exclaiming a valid point and giving your opinion. "Social Media, recently, has had a great negative/positive impact on teenagers. My personal opinion is that ........"
- Remember this 3-point structure for the MAIN BODY of your essay:
(i) General "For" Argument - Include all valid points that are logical and EMPHASIZE on them - All points must be in favour of your opinion and they should be your STRONGEST points.
(ii) Counter Argument - Pick out you're strongest counter arguments and state them. Be completely logical and honest when pointing the counter arguments. The reason for this is that if you're writing in favour, someone else will write against. You have to give both sides of the argument and prove yourself right.
(iii) Disputing Counter Arguments - After writing the counter arguments, you must dispute them and prove them to be either wrong or not STRONG enough to win the argument. Here's an example:
A counter argument could be "Social media is required for teenagers, it forms a platform for conversations, discussions and sharing valued information".
Disputing this counter argument "Although it does provide a medium for communication, teenagers waste most of their precious time in procrastinating since they needlessly read comics/have useless discussions. Social media is one of main reasons why teenagers procrastinate." You can also add the fact that other mediums of communication such as e-mail, messaging are also available.
- Ending your essay, now, you don't simply conclude an argument because it is a waste of words and time since you're only repeating what you've said. Two ways to end an Argumentative Essay are:
(i) Conclude your essay by restating your opinion in a different perspective, i.e. you could say, "Other resources of communication should be adopted such as messaging and teenagers should be encouraged to have outdoor activities rather than sit home and stick their heads to the computers."
(ii) After disputing you're counter arguments - finish on a high by adding a strong ending sentence to conclude your essay. For example "Hence all these points show that Social media is indeed an unnecessary part of life which has been forcibly indulged into the life of teenagers."
- Things to remember:
(i) You're not listing points or stating your opinion. You're trying to CONVINCE the examiner that you're opinion is correct using LOGICAL points.
(ii) Don't get emotional and carried away over the course of your writing. Don't be prejudiced.
(iii) DO NOT EMPHASIZE TOO MUCH ON VOCABULARY. Sentence structures, punctuation, tenses are all equally as important as vocabulary. Don't forcibly use strong words if you don't know their correct usage.
(iv) You're not making a list of your points. Don't use "firstly, secondly, thirdly and finally". Remember, you're language is being tested. Use good expressions and connectives such as "Furthermore, In addition to this".
http://www.slideshare.net/englishbites/useful-argumentative-essay-words-and-phrases
Here is a great website concerning words and expressions. Do read it.

Difference b/w Discursive and Argumentative Essays:
In Discursive essays, you present a balanced argument that contains 'for' and 'against' points. You do not state your opinion.
In Argumentative, you give your opinion and convince the reader on your point of view.

Here are some pointers from the IGCSE Examiner Tips:
- Be clear about the difference between an argumentative and a discursive essay. When
asked directly to give your own opinion you should commit yourself to a line of argument.
When asked to give a range of possible views then you are being discursive and may or
may not choose to say what you personally believe.
- Mention counter arguments – and dispute them. A strong argument includes refutation of
the other point of view. This way you can show that you are not being purely ignorant or
prejudiced in your response. It is important to show balance in presenting the argument.
- If you are having difficulty finding enough points to support your stance you
should consider arguing the opposite view – it might be easier!
- Aim for an effective introduction which captures attention and makes the topic and
context clear
- You should end on the side you are arguing for structure your essay so that you deal
with the other side first and end strongly to clinch your argument with a final convincing
point . Do not repeat yourself - ‘To sum up’ and ‘In conclusion’ are not strong endings as
you won’t be saying anything new to convince your reader.
- It is generally advisable to argue your own personal viewpoint as it is likely to sound more
convincing. It is however, possible, to argue effectively for or against an argument which you
have never considered before, provided that you can marshal some evidence from the
media, facts, statistics and experience. These are the areas from which you draw your
supporting detail and illustration.
- Do not get too passionate about the topic as this will make your essay sound
too emotional and subjective, and therefore less persuasive.
- Sometimes there is a single word in the question which alters the emphasis of the
argument, for instance the word ‘compulsory’. Make sure you pay attention to the key words
in questions when you are planning and answering – it is worth underlining key words to
remind you.
- Try using personal pronouns - ‘I’, ‘you’ and ‘we’ can make your argument seem
more authentic and inclusive.
- Do not start each paragraph with a numbered point- firstly, secondly, thirdly and so on- as
this can get tedious for the reader and sound quite artificial if the ideas are not in fact
sequential. Use other paragraph linking words, the ones which show whether your argument is
continuing in the same direction (e.g. ‘furthermore’, ‘in addition’) or changing direction (e.g.
‘nevertheless’, ‘on the other hand’). The key is to make sure that your argument is “building” as
you go. Use your connectives to help you take your reader with you so that they can follow your
train of thought all the way through.
- Three-point structures (sometimes called tricolons) can sound authoritative, e.g.
‘involving the learners, the teachers and the parent’. More than three of anything becomes a
list; fewer lacks persuasive impact and overuse of tricolons is rarely effective.

My Guesses for this years Argumentative Essay:
-Social Media has become a necessity for teenagers. Do you agree?
-Smartphones are more useful than harmful. Do you agree?
-Increase in Cyber Crime has made the internet an unsafe place. What are your views?
-Terrorism is one of the world's most major problems. Do you agree?
The last one is controversial but still, it can be an option.

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Thanks for posting this! :) About the One Word Essay, can it be answered as a narrative?
 
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Descriptive Essays:
- In descriptive essays, you have to describe a person, place or thing. If the question states "describe a person that helped you in the time of need", don't just go on about how the person helped you, you have to describe the person and his attributes as well.
- Describing people:
(i) Add the characteristics of the person such as "tall, well built, shiny black hair, etc.". Remember to describe the height, age, build, face, eyes, hair and clothing of the person.
(ii) Describe the attributes and hobbies of the person and why he/she inspires/motivates you.
- Describing places:
(i) State where and what the place is (For example Lulu Island in Abu Dhabi).
(ii) Describe how far the place is from your house (how you got there) and why do you like the place.
(iii) Describe the unique features of the place and what is so good about it. Describe the weather and how it felt "hot" or "cold" when you were there.
(iv) Would you recommend the place to others (for vacations, etc.)? If yes, then why?
- Describing things:
(i) Name the thing and what type of gadget/thing it is (For example your 24-carrot Rolex WATCH :p)
(ii) Describe the appearance of the thing, remember to be precise in mentioning the color, shape and size of the object.
(iii) Describe the features of the object and why it is so special to you.
- Starting Descriptives; start by naming the person/place/thing. For person, describe if he's popular or not. For places, describe it's location and popularity. For things, name the brand and how the people world - wide adore it.
- Main body; go into further detail on the topic.
(i) If you're describing a person then go in detail of the appearance, characteristics and qualities of the person (in separate paragraphs).
(ii) If you're describing a place, go in depth about the wonders of the place, the key features and leisure facilities, the weather (decide paragraphing accordingly).
(iii) If you're describing things, most preferably two paragraphs in detail of its appearance and how its features and background make it an important object for you.
- Ending your essay; conclude your essay by summarizing all you've described and recommending (in case of place) or wishing best of luck (in case of people such as teachers/sportsmen) or admiring the object that you hold so dear.
- Key point; in descriptive, VOCABULARY is very important because you want the reader to imagine what you're describing! Nobody just likes to read a description of a person or place or object. With appropriate vocabulary you have to make it an interesting read.
- Here are a few links to help you build your vocabulary:
http://ebasics.blogspot.com/2008/06/vocabulary-adjectives-for-describing.html
http://ieltskey.blogspot.com/2012/08/vocabulary-chapter-2-describing-things.html
http://www.speakenglish.co.uk/vocab/describing_people
http://o2-level-english.blogspot.com/search/label/Vocabulary in action (Link credits: Shadow)

IGCSE Examiner Tips for Descriptive Writing:
- It is difficult to write interesting descriptions, so this type of composition should not be
attempted unless you have had practice and success at this type of writing. To write a strong
descriptive answer you will need to use a wide range of vocabulary and even use imagery
to engage reader interest. Unless the reader can see the picture they will not be able to relate to
the experience.
- You will need to use a variety of sentence structures. All forms of repetition should be
avoided – unless you are deliberately using it carefully for effect.
- You will need to evoke all five senses to create an environment and atmosphere, as well
as details of size, shape and colour. Make colour precise, e.g. ‘scarlet’, ‘azure’, ‘off-white’,
‘bluish-grey’.
- Try to avoid common, overused, vague, short and childish vocabulary, such as ‘nice’,
‘big’, ‘little’, ‘a lot of’, ‘good’, and ‘bad’.
- Each noun probably needs one or more adjectives in front of it to give sufficient detail.
- Don’t let your description become static - give structure and progression to your
description e.g. moving towards or through something, such as a street market or busy shopping
mall, or going through a period of time, an hour or a day for instance, and recording the changes.
 
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Ok a tip for everyone. Always try to SHOW, NOT TELL.......... e-g instead of saying the weather was hot and he was sweating, you could say, his wet shirt clung to his body, as the sun beat down mercilessly with all its might.....or something like that :)
 
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One Word Essays:
- The good thing about one word essays is that you can write it as a narrative, as an inspirational essay or as an essay describing an attribute of life.
- Starting the essay:
(i) Add a quote relevant to the topic, it generally helps. Don't just make up bizarre quotes, if you know a quote then add it, if you don't then no problem.
(ii) Start the essay in a open manner, describe the word and it's importance (if you're not going towards narrative style). For example: "Dreams - Dreams are an essential part of life, they are a collection of all the emotions and sensations of a person gathered into a real life play."
- The main body should be composed of how the attributes work as an inspirational, important part of life. For example: "Dreams act as an inspiration for people. Everyone dreams about what is hidden deep within their minds, something they desire, something they thrive for. When a person dreams about something he/she wants, he/she feels rejuvenated and inspired to do something to fulfill his dreams".
- Conclusion, summarize you're thoughts about the matter and finish with a strong sentence. For Example: "Imagine a person who does not dream - how envious he would feel; nothing to aim at, nothing to be inspired by."
- Generally, one word essays can be very open but tough to write. You need to put in a lot of thought into the essay and hence the plan is very essential. Take your time and plan out how you will approach the essay and then write an interesting, factual account on the topic.
- If you're writing narratives on a One Word Essay, go for stories like "Success Stories", "How Dreams Turned Into Reality".
- Here are some sample essays, read them and get an idea of how to approach the topics:
http://www.shareyouressays.com/1454/short-essay-on-success-is-not-a-matter-of-luck
http://cameronsenglish.wordpress.com/2012/04/24/narrative-essay-about-dreams/
http://www.scholaradvisor.com/essay-examples/narrative-essay-success-story/
http://www.shareyouressays.com/3478/846-words-short-essay-on-dreams
- If you want more samples, read the Red-spot past paper answers for English. They have good, easy one word essay samples.

Hope these tips help! :)
Everyone please pray that we all get A*'s in English and all other subjects this year. Aameen!
 
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One Word Essays:
- The good thing about one word essays is that you can write it as a narrative, as an inspirational essay or as an essay describing an attributing of life.
- Starting the essay:
(i) Add a quote relevant to the topic, it generally helps. Don't just make up bizarre quotes, if you know a quote then add it, if you don't then no problem.
(ii) Start of the essay in a open manner, describe the word and it's importance (if you're not going towards narrative style). For example: "Dreams - Dreams are an essential part of life, they are a collection of all the emotions and sensations of a person gathered into a real life play."
- The main body should be composed of how the attributes work as an inspirational, important part of life. For example: "Dreams act as an inspiration for people. Everyone dreams about what is hidden deep within their minds, something they desire, something they thrive for. When a person dreams about something he wants, he/she feels rejuvenated and inspired to something to fulfill his dreams".
- Conclusion, summarize you're thoughts about the matter and finish with a strong sentence. For Example: "Imagine a person who does not dream - how envious he would feel; nothing to aim at, nothing to be inspired by."
- Generally, one word essays can be very open but tough to write. You need to put in a lot of thought into the essay and hence the plan is very essential. Take your time and plan out how you will approach the essay and then write an interesting, factual account on the topic.
- If you're writing narratives on a One Word Essay, go for stories like "Success Stories", "How Dreams Turned Into Reality".
- Here are some sample essays, read them and get an idea of how to approach the topics:
http://www.shareyouressays.com/1454/short-essay-on-success-is-not-a-matter-of-luck
http://cameronsenglish.wordpress.com/2012/04/24/narrative-essay-about-dreams/
http://www.scholaradvisor.com/essay-examples/narrative-essay-success-story/
http://www.shareyouressays.com/3478/846-words-short-essay-on-dreams
- If you want more samples, read the Red-spot past paper answers for English. They have good, easy one word essay samples.

Hope these tips help! :)
Everyone please pray that we all get A*'s in English and all other subjects this year. Aameen!
Thnx for that bro :)
 
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Descriptive Essays:
- In descriptive essays, you have to describe a person, place or thing. If the question states "describe a person that helped you in the time of need", don't just go on about how the person helped you, you have to describe the person and his attributes as well.
- Describing people:
(i) Add the characteristics of the person such as "tall, well built, shiny black hair, etc.". Remember to describe the height, age, build, face, eyes, hair and clothing of the person.
(ii) Describe the attributes and hobbies of the person and why he/she inspires/motivates you.
- Describing places:
(i) State where and what the place is (For example Lulu Island in Abu Dhabi).
(ii) Describe how far the place is from your house (how you got there) and why do you like the place.
(iii) Describe the unique features of the place and what is so good about it. Describe the weather and how it felt "hot" or "cold" when you were there.
(iv) Would you recommend the place to others (for vacations, etc.)? If yes, then why?
- Describing things:
(i) Name the thing and what type of gadget/thing it is (For example your 24-carrot Rolex WATCH :p)
(ii) Describe the appearance of the thing, remember to be precise in mentioning the color, shape and size of the object.
(iii) Describe the features of the object and why it is so special to you.
- Starting Descriptives; start by naming the person/place/thing. For person, describe if he's popular or not. For places, describe it's location and popularity. For things, name the brand and how the people world - wide adore it.
- Main body; go into further detail on the topic.
(i) If you're describing a person then go in detail of the appearance, characteristics and qualities of the person (in separate paragraphs).
(ii) If you're describing a place, go in depth about the wonders of the place, the key features and leisure facilities, the weather (decide paragraphing accordingly).
(iii) If you're describing things, most preferably two paragraphs in detail of its appearance and how its features and background make it an important object for you.
- Ending your essay; conclude your essay by summarizing all you've described and recommending (in case of place) or wishing best of luck (in case of people such as teachers/sportsmen) or admiring the object that you hold so dear.
- Key point; in descriptive, VOCABULARY is very important because you want the reader to imagine what you're describing! Nobody just likes to read a description of a person or place or object. With appropriate vocabulary you have to make it an interesting read.
- Here are a few links to help you build your vocabulary:
http://ebasics.blogspot.com/2008/06/vocabulary-adjectives-for-describing.html
http://ieltskey.blogspot.com/2012/08/vocabulary-chapter-2-describing-things.html
http://www.speakenglish.co.uk/vocab/describing_people
http://o2-level-english.blogspot.com/search/label/Vocabulary in action (Link credits: Shadow)

IGCSE Examiner Tips for Descriptive Writing:
- It is difficult to write interesting descriptions, so this type of composition should not be
attempted unless you have had practice and success at this type of writing. To write a strong
descriptive answer you will need to use a wide range of vocabulary and even use imagery
to engage reader interest. Unless the reader can see the picture they will not be able to relate to
the experience.
- You will need to use a variety of sentence structures. All forms of repetition should be
avoided – unless you are deliberately using it carefully for effect.
- You will need to evoke all five senses to create an environment and atmosphere, as well
as details of size, shape and colour. Make colour precise, e.g. ‘scarlet’, ‘azure’, ‘off-white’,
‘bluish-grey’.
- Try to avoid common, overused, vague, short and childish vocabulary, such as ‘nice’,
‘big’, ‘little’, ‘a lot of’, ‘good’, and ‘bad’.
- Each noun probably needs one or more adjectives in front of it to give sufficient detail.
- Don’t let your description become static - give structure and progression to your
description e.g. moving towards or through something, such as a street market or busy shopping
mall, or going through a period of time, an hour or a day for instance, and recording the changes.
This is awesome! May Allah shower His BLESSINGS upon you. Great work. I was going for descriptions because I was fed up with narratives.. :)
 
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