For all those who achieved 90+,aka A*, or beyond in urdu B olevel....

[M.Omar]

Ok so u getting emotional???
look i said b4 u r good at this essaay thing but use a bit simple language , i mean not too many difficult words in a sentence. Moreover for A* u need to ace paper 2 , translation , comprehension, summary etc. focus on them too and if u do u can IA get A*.

Nah .....I am not getting sentimental....I apologize if you felt that way.
Look bro this thread is related to essays.
OK.I will post other stuff like letters,dialogue e.t.c.Sorry again.

 

[M.Omar]

Mustafa janab post essays of ur own.....i just need a sample.

 

[M.Omar]

Mustafa Janab,khafa to nahi ho gaye.....I need ur reply bro.

 

[Mustafa Malik]

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Mustafa Janab,khafa to nahi ho gaye.....I need ur reply bro.

no kabhi nahi, m not khafa just busy wd my mocks part2 ..gosh these papers are on my nerves.
Bro dont worry , u r really good , just focus on practiz of papers and find a good teacher who can mark them to u. Keep in mind the time limit. U r good at urdu , just avoid writing too many difficult words in one line , otherwise u r good.
( actually i was waiting for ur reply)

 

[M.Omar]

gee thnx.(will look to post stuff later on)
by the way,wht r ur grades in isl and pak.st(cambridge)
HAPPY MOCKSSSSS!

 

[Mustafa Malik]

gee thnx.(will look to post stuff later on)
by the way,wht r ur grades in isl and pak.st(cambridge)
HAPPY MOCKSSSSS!

I gave islamiat , math and urdu in last session ( not pakistan studies) and by grace of Allah got A* in three of them, this session i will sit for bio, chem, physics, english and pak.std.

 

[Mustafa Malik]

gee thnx.(will look to post stuff later on)
by the way,wht r ur grades in isl and pak.st(cambridge)
HAPPY MOCKSSSSS!

Actually i have a different story, in 2010 i went to abroad wd my family and when i returned in 2012, my parents said that i have to sit for my o levels now.
I was shocked as i had been cut off from islamiat, urdu n pakistan std for like more than 2 yrs almost , so i chose maths and gave 3 of them privately.
Now giving through skool....
May Allah help all of us to ace our xamz.

 

[M.Omar]

now thats something commendable....
Malik sahab kya ap any islamiat answers post kar saktay hein....just as a sample.i need ur pieces of writing that u wrote in ur exams or when u wrote any answers according to the time limit just like in any real exam.....u might have done this practice at ur home i reckon........any answer wud be useful....
Again,u have a revering and good grades.....
LOOKS LIKE THIS THREAD MAY TURN INTO AN ISLAMIAT ONE AS WELL!!!

 

[M.Omar]

FOR ALL THE PEEPS...................PLEASE REPLY IN THIS THREAD.....I AND U DONT NEED VIEWS IN THIS THREAD BUT RATHER REPLIES AND LIKEWISE DISCUSSION ACTIVITIES.....
Do not fear WHTEVER UR URDU STANDARD e.t.c may be,we all can learn a thing or two.....
Bravery is something u show tht u regret or u fear,u know due to reasons........but can u stand out from those who regret to who try on and on...........Dar key agay jeet hay(Dew pi)

 

[Mustafa Malik]

FOR ALL THE PEEPS...................PLEASE REPLY IN THIS THREAD.....I AND U DONT NEED VIEWS IN THIS THREAD BUT RATHER REPLIES AND LIKEWISE DISCUSSION ACTIVITIES.....
Do not fear WHTEVER UR URDU STANDARD e.t.c may be,we all can learn a thing or two.....
Bravery is something u show tht u regret or u fear,u know due to reasons........but can u stand out from those who regret to who try on and on...........Dar key agay jeet hay(Dew pi)

nahi nahi der kis baat ka , asal main sab cheezain cznx or idher udhr de diye hn k ab dhondna zara mushkil h lekin ek help kar sakta hn......
If u see the oct nov 2012 paper 1 urdu b... the paragraph, i remember it asks something how ppl should be encouraged to do exercise ( i exactly dont remember) , what i think i got an A* is because i wrote some points that t believe are somehow my mind does not work like i wrote .... mukhtulif mukamat per gyms banani chaiye take logon ka warzish ki taraf ruhjaan barhe..., i mean k most of the ppl would have written k pamphlets likhay jane chaiye take ka warzish ki ehemiyat ka undaza ho lekin for an A* u need to give something that u think is a bit different.
Then in the letter that came, i wrote ( see the paper 1 and then read) :
khane k wakt one dish ko follow nahi kiya gaya tha, mujhde yeh cheez achi nahi lagi cuz mulk bhar main yeh qaanon mutarif karvaya gaya h k one dish honi chahiye shaadiyon per.
dosra yeh k shaadi sari raat chalti rahi halan k logon ko pata h k mulk main bijli ka fukadaan h............
naujwan larke larkiyan saath nachne lage yeh humare deen aur muasheray k usoolon k khilaf h, mujhe yeh acha nahi laga
one thing more which i wrote .....
shaadi ki takreeb k end main sare khaandan ne akhetay picture khinchvaein, mujhe yeh acha laga kyon k is tarah hum khoobsurat lamhat ko qaid kar letay hn waghera
U SEE HOW THINKING SOMETHING DIFFERENT HELPS U TO SCORE BETTER AS UR IDEAS R DIFFERENT FROM OTHERS WHO SAT WITH U. FOR ISLAMIAT I DID THE SAME, WROTE A BIT DIFFERENT. hope k ab ap ka gila khatam hua

 

[M.Omar]

Dude.....this PEEPS THING was for those who are visiting this thread rendering an increase in its view but not replies.....i want such visitors to write something as well.........
Not meant for u....
Well(regarding wht u wrote) thats it...i just wanted to know wht u wrote(content) and how u wrote(language)
u used pretty much clear and fairly simple vocabulary though the format and u know the style is there.......Try to find ur lost "treasure" and reply like this more often.by the way,which isl book u used(just curious)

Once again the PEEPS thing was not meant for u............

 

[Mustafa Malik]

Dude.....this PEEPS THING was for those who are visiting this thread rendering an increase in its view but not replies.....i want such visitors to write something as well.........
Not meant for u....
Well(regarding wht u wrote) thats it...i just wanted to know wht u wrote(content) and how u wrote(language)
u used pretty much clear and fairly simple vocabulary though the format and u know the style is there.......Try to find ur lost "treasure" and reply like this more often.by the way,which isl book u used(just curious)

Once again the PEEPS thing was not meant for u............

ohkay i tgought u said to me
Well for urdu i used shazia islam book and mujibur rehman one.
For islamiat Farkhanda Noor, Dr iftikhar ul haq and Yasmeen malik's ( they all are helpful)

 

[Mustafa Malik]

Dude.....this PEEPS THING was for those who are visiting this thread rendering an increase in its view but not replies.....i want such visitors to write something as well.........
Not meant for u....
Well(regarding wht u wrote) thats it...i just wanted to know wht u wrote(content) and how u wrote(language)
u used pretty much clear and fairly simple vocabulary though the format and u know the style is there.......Try to find ur lost "treasure" and reply like this more often.by the way,which isl book u used(just curious)

Once again the PEEPS thing was not meant for u............

u see i said its language B so ur voccab should not be high and extraordinary. Instead it should be crystal clear so the examiner can see through..

 

[princess sofia]

If you are going to take your time..............I guess I should post another essay........kindly comment on it.tell the marks and stuff like that...By the way,a little astonished at so less marks..I mean 11 out of 15.....OK...never mind about that now...
So here is the essay
Deehat(Villages) KI TARAQI(development)
1..DEEHAT ki taraqi mein taaleem(education) ka kirdar
2.Hakoomat(Government) ka kirdar
3.Deehati kin masaeel(problems) ka shikar hein or kyon(why)?
Maeeshat(economy) or istehkam(stability) ka munbah(markaz or centre) ho nay kay bawajood yein(this) eik almia(tragedy) ha kay hamary haan(here) deehat ilm(knowledge) kay sarchashmay say mehroom hain halankay taaleem to taraqi kay jadah(way) par pehla qadm ha.ilm say na sirf shaoor(knowledge) aay ga kay kis behtar dhang(way) say fasloon(crops) ki kashtkari(cultivation) ki jae,machinery ka istimaal kia jae balka kae iqtasaadi(social) masaeel ka tadaruk(finish) bhi ho sakay ga kyon ka logon ko apnay markaz ka ilm ho jae ga.yoon(through this) ma,ashara(society) pashraft karay ga or taraqi ka aftab(sun) chamakta rahe ga.
Ghurbat-o-iflaas(poverty) kay mary deehatoon ko hakoomti tawajuh(attention) ki azhad zaroorat.hakoomat machinery,abpashi(irrigation) kay zaraeih(sources),dispensary,haspatalloon(hospitals)or sab say aham(zaroori) darsgahoon(educational institutions) ko faraham kar kay taraqi ko lazmi bana sakti ha.alawa,azein(even more) deegar(many) mansoobon(plans) say deehat ko pasmandigi(undeveloped) say taraqi yafta banasaktay hein.
khah/agarchah isi pasmandigi ki waja maa,ashi(economy) or ma,ashati maseel hein.yein log jahil,towahum parast(nostalgia loving sort) or puranay rawajoon par atkay hoeey hein.yoon yein zulm,kasmapursi(poverty) or ajeeran(plight) zindagi goozar rahein hein.yaani baat phir(again) taaleem ki taraf aati hay jo yaqeenun(really) har tarah ki taraqi ki zamin(guarantee giver) ha..

try to use sme idioms , and if possible sme poetry , a small one , by the way ap ki vocabulary bohat achi hai , kamaz kum merae sae to achi hai

 

[M.Omar]

Thanks........appreciated that...

 

[M.Omar]

Mustafa janab..........agar apnay tehriri namoonay nahi dhoond pa rahe to khudhi kuch likh lo................i mean it shouldn,t be like tht u forgot urdu or tht u have to study urdu books again in order to spice up ur work or any writings.....it should be with u from now onwards.right!
waqt ki bhi koi qabahat nahi honi chahiye and u can just read up a page daily or once in a while to keep this urdu practice.......do post something .
agar qabahat to zaroor agah karo.I have my cambridge exams too u know in this session but still try to post something like essays or any other writing stuff(tht comes in p1 of course)...ok yar...

 

[Mustafa Malik]

Mustafa janab..........agar apnay tehriri namoonay nahi dhoond pa rahe to khudhi kuch likh lo................i mean it shouldn,t be like tht u forgot urdu or tht u have to study urdu books again in order to spice up ur work or any writings.....it should be with u from now onwards.right!
waqt ki bhi koi qabahat nahi honi chahiye and u can just read up a page daily or once in a while to keep this urdu practice.......do post something .
agar qabahat to zaroor agah karo.I have my cambridge exams too u know in this session but still try to post something like essays or any other writing stuff(tht comes in p1 of course)...ok yar...

okay i will post tomorrow. No problem> Plz pray for me that i get a* in all others too.

 

[princess sofia]

Urdu guss papers kab post hon gae , or they wont be available

 

[M.Omar]

well,i pray in earnest tht u get A*,s...infact,i wish tht u may get beyond the A*level(know wht i mean).
In the end,it,s ur devotion(and numerous other elements) thts gonna help u......Happy Papers.

 

[M.Omar]

Urdu guss papers kab post hon gae , or they wont be available

guess pprz ki zaroorat bhi nahi honi chahiye........coz the subject matter is infinite and in the end,its how u DO it!No guess paper can provide tht....