Let's write a story together!

[applepie1996]

Ellie returned to her old brown wooden house. All she can think of is wanting to escape, she wanted to be free, she wanted liberation. However what one seeks is always hard to find. Looking at the beautiful vista from her window. The greenness of the grass sparkling in her eyelids, and the carefree tone that the sky had. She took a deep breath, and inhaled the beauty of what was around her. She closed her eyes and listened to the tune of a grasshopper, making lazy sounds in the vicinity. She opened her eyes, the explosion of the deep green color of her eyes, made her realize how lovely the world is. How come all this beauty is all around us, and yet we can't grasp it, we can't reach it. Is that the reason why people say "the pursuit of happiness" instead of "the achievement of happiness". Is it true that happiness can only be pursued, that you can never attain it, no matter how hard you chase it? These thoughts where rushing into her brain, and tickling the veins in her head. She realized she was thinking so deeply. Suddenly she snapped back to reality.

woooh u wanna becum the nxt Shakespeare or sumthin

 

[applepie1996]

it was'nt late when she realised that her petty tears could do wonders and she posessed secret powers.

simple english i lyk it

 

[whitetiger64]

For each tear that dropped down, a strong invisible shield began forming around her, protecting her from the dangers that surrounded her from all sides....

 

[Soldier313]

As she became more and more aware of this great power she possessed, she realised that, with great power comes great responsibility! This wasn't what her parents would have wanted her to do in face of calamity, this wasn't the time for tears! Rather it was time to begin a revolution.....to stand up and show the world that she was the true queen. Tears in this situation would merely portray weakness, lack of confidence and fear! But she was the daughter of the Caesar of Rome.....she was considered a symbol of hope for her people and she would make them proud!

 

[Silent Hunter]

Since there are many members who enjoy writing, I thought this would inspire them. So what we'll have to do is, we'll be posting sentences, one by one and we'll write a beautiful story. Rules are as simple as ABCs. They are as follows,
1. Before you post your sentences, always read the comment posted above.
2. Try to relate your sentences with the above post so that it would make sense.
3. Be imaginative and creative.
4. Do not use any of the XPC members' names as the characters in the story.
5. You can post as many sentences you want as there is no limit in posting the sentences.

I hope everyone is going to follow the rules. So let's write a story together! I'll begin and the next person is going to continue.

"She lived in a palace like mansion and she was not less than a princess. Each and every little wish of her was fulfilled until that unforgettable day on which her beloved parents waved goodbye to her, unwillingly. It seemed like destiny had different plans for her .."

nice idea But we will have to read the previous few posts too i think .... because its like if one person posts a thing which had already been posted before... will make the story confusing .... so few previous posts should be read too....

 

[AngelicBeauty]

simple english i lyk it

seriously i cant speak any bttr english......

 

[Myste Rious]

nice idea But we will have to read the previous few posts too i think .... because its like if one person posts a thing which had already been posted before... will make the story confusing .... so few previous posts should be read too....

You have got a good point. I didn't think that way before.
Looks like I need to bring some amendments.
Thanks for letting me know.

 

[étudiante]

As she became more and more aware of this great power she possessed, she realised that, with great power comes great responsibility! This wasn't what her parents would have wanted her to do in face of calamity, this wasn't the time for tears! Rather it was time to begin a revolution.....to stand up and show the world that she was the true queen. Tears in this situation would merely portray weakness, lack of confidence and fear! But she was the daughter of the Caesar of Rome.....she was considered a symbol of hope for her people and she would make them proud!

And so she wiped off the tears that were glimmering in her eyes. She stood up and faced the Nile. It was her destiny to rule and she had to fulfil it. She returned to her forces and began to plan the next stage of what she could do in order to live up to the dreams of the people, the needs of the people, the right of the people.

 

[Soldier313]

And so she wiped off the tears that were glimmering in her eyes. She stood up and faced the Nile. It was her destiny to rule and she had to fulfil it. She returned to her forces and began to plan the next stage of what she could do in order to live up to the dreams of the people, the needs of the people, the right of the people.

As she stood with her glistening armour on the plains of her father's kingdom,she heard the overwhelming roar of the people, pledging their support to her. She knew she was expected to say somehing to the people and warriors who had walked miles to show their support, yet all she could manage was a small wave and a tiny smile......she was touched by their commitment and loyalty towards their kingdom and their rightful queen, and was reassured that everything would soon be fine...it was now time for the war to begin....

 

[robinhoodmustafa]

and the War was scheduled on the First Lunar Date of Karama Festival so the Queen ordered an Army of 2000 Soldier's..............

 

[applepie1996]

seriously i cant speak any bttr english......

me too

 

[applepie1996]

and the War was scheduled on the First Lunar Date of Karama Festival so the Queen ordered an Army of 2000 Soldier's..............

but suddenly earthquake struck the place killing all the soldiers dat were dere so dere was nuthin left for her, she was the only survivor left dere so she sat and strted 2 cry again when suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder she turned around and saw dat there was a creepy old man and dis was wat he said 2 her "my child the powers dat u posses r beyond ur imagination u culd defeat an army of billion ppl by urself so instead of sittin here and wasting ur tears y dunt u get up and do sumthin bout it

 

[Myste Rious]

Once again the destiny changed its plans towards her. Once again she is alone. Once again she lost those who were close to her. She had nobody now expect the old man who came to her and shared the most amazing news ever.

 

[applepie1996]

but she did get wat the man had told her cuz she had never felt that she possessed any powers she tried and tried and started crying when nuthin happened then the old man told her b patient my dear it will cum 2 u 1 day

 

[applepie1996]

but she did get wat the man had told her cuz she had never felt that she possessed any powers she tried and tried and started crying when nuthin happened then the old man told her b patient my dear it will cum 2 u 1 day

 

[whitetiger64]

The old man guided her to a small house at the edge of the forest. He told her a women lived there with her 6 kids. This lady will help our princess to develop her powers and teach her to use them in the best way. But he warned her it would be ver hard work and she must give up her kingdom for a while, and concentrate on the task at hand.

 

[Minato112]

Finally they arrived and our princess met the woman. The girl started working very hard and felt her powers growing.

 

[applepie1996]

but the old woman seeing how powerful she was started taking advantage of the girl
the old woman herself had a beyond which the girl didn't know of she could absorb stuff
so everyday when the princess would sleep she would absorb her powers little by little

 

[Minato112]

On the long run, the princess felt her powers vanishing and started to suspect something. Then one day, while the old woman was absorbing her powers in her sleep, suddenly she had a nightmare and woke up! And she saw the old woman by her side reciting some words, more likely like a ritual...

 

[Lostsoul]

The woman was very much concentrating in her recitations, till then the princess got hold of her slipper and hit her head with it and got the opportunity to escape, whereas the old woman was back from her metaphysical world until she saw the princess running