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Poetry! =P

arlery

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robinhoodmustafa said:
Bewafa
Punjabi Poetry :)
Gal Sun Mere tu mutiyare,
Ki samjhe apne aap nu?
Mere magru tu Ki ki kardi,
ayee gal bus tu hi jandi,
Menu safaiyan pesh na kar,
rab kolo thora jheha darr!!
Sikh ja ke pyaar karne da val,
jhoote sang sade ik ik pal.

Bewafa bewafa,
bewafa nikli hai tu,,
Ni jhootha pyar,jhootha pyar,
jhoota piyaar kita hai tu.
Bewafaa bewafaa,
bewafa nikli hai tu,
ni jhootha pyaar, jhootha pyaar,
jhoota pyaar kita hai tu!!
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^ Imran Khan lyrics don't qualify as poetry. o_O
 
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Aaj apni Muhabat ko naya morr diya us ne,
Mere liye baalon ko khula chorr diya us ne!
Pehle hansta tha main muh khol k,
Ab to Aage wala hi daant torr diya us ne!
Us ne sargoshi ka kaha main betaab ho gaya,
Kaan paas kiya to marorr diya us ne!
Sardiyan aaeen to laya maaltay mehboob k liye,
Malta kha k chilka ankhon main nichor diya us ne!
Bewafai ki had b dikha di ik din us zalim ne,
Milne ghar gaya to pechay kutta chor diya usny..’
 
MU}{@MM@D @}{MED

MU}{@MM@D @}{MED

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Lo Jii
AA GAYA
GARMI KA TORR!!!!!
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FARAZ KA TAAZA SHAIR!!
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HOTAY HAIN DUNYA ME HAR JAGA HADSAY
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HOTAY HAIN DUNYA ME HAR JAGA HADSAY !!!
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KALLAY KALLAY FAALSAY!
THANDAY MITHAY FAALSAY!
 
Stancy Motha

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ok so first poem I ever written in my enter life..yah..it kinda sucks... but I posted it so u ppl can recognise u'r talent wen u compare mine with u'rs...(y)
hey btw Epiphany....u r too gud man...I no cuz I never get gud poets...n I didn't get u even though u wrote in english...not offending u... I am serious...u hav a bright future in poetry...(y)

ok so here goes....the worst poem of the year...

so yet another challenge knocking at my door,
forced to accept, not reject and asked to go on with the flow.
off I go with my weapons, sweaty hands and a feeble mind,
and as I wait for that moment, I wish if I could rewind.

because as I stand here, I realize, beyond my tolerence was I forced,
every second, minute, hour, every step throughout my life.
not a decision have I made, with my own will and intellect.
and now I stand here just ashamed, as my thoughts and feelings they neglect.

all my life, simply did,what I was told like I were a tamed domestic animal.
but it's time things changed and I am treated fair and good,
time that I was realised, recognised and understood.

(sorry I know abrupt stop, pls. be honest in u'r comments);)
 
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Stancy Motha said:
ok so first poem I ever written in my enter life..yah..it kinda sucks... but I posted it so u ppl can recognise u'r talent wen u compare mine with u'rs...(y)
hey btw Epiphany....u r too gud man...I no cuz I never get gud poets...n I didn't get u even though u wrote in english...not offending u... I am serious...u hav a bright future in poetry...(y)

ok so here goes....the worst poem of the year...

so yet another challenge knocking at my door,
forced to accept, not reject and asked to go on with the flow.
off I go with my weapons, sweaty hands and a feeble mind,
and as I wait for that moment, I wish if I could rewind.

because as I stand here, I realize, beyond my tolerence was I forced,
every second, minute, hour, every step throughout my life.
not a decision have I made, with my own will and intellect.
and now I stand here just ashamed, as my thoughts and feelings they neglect.

all my life, simply did,what I was told like I were a tamed domestic animal.
but it's time things changed and I am treated fair and good,
time that I was realised, recognised and understood.

(sorry I know abrupt stop, pls. be honest in u'r comments);)
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now that is something which could be used in a rap :D n im gonna do that!! btw its awesome :)
 
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Chalo aao ab mosam ka soroor Chakhain,
tamam dawain bachoon ki puhach say door rakhain.
Tum say milny ki ab kia justujo karain,
Tabyat ziada kharab ho to doctor say rujo karain.
humari chahat ka kuch to khayal karain,
syrup ko achi tarha hilla ker istamal karain.
Dil mara toot gaya uthi jab us ki dolli,
Subha dopaher sham aik aik goli.
Dil mera ishq karny par razamand rahy ga,
juma k din clinic band rahy ga.
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Epiphany

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Stancy Motha said:
ok so first poem I ever written in my enter life..yah..it kinda sucks... but I posted it so u ppl can recognise u'r talent wen u compare mine with u'rs...(y)
hey btw Epiphany....u r too gud man...I no cuz I never get gud poets...n I didn't get u even though u wrote in english...not offending u... I am serious...u hav a bright future in poetry...(y)

ok so here goes....the worst poem of the year...

so yet another challenge knocking at my door,
forced to accept, not reject and asked to go on with the flow.
off I go with my weapons, sweaty hands and a feeble mind,
and as I wait for that moment, I wish if I could rewind.

because as I stand here, I realize, beyond my tolerence was I forced,
every second, minute, hour, every step throughout my life.
not a decision have I made, with my own will and intellect.
and now I stand here just ashamed, as my thoughts and feelings they neglect.

all my life, simply did,what I was told like I were a tamed domestic animal.
but it's time things changed and I am treated fair and good,
time that I was realised, recognised and understood.

(sorry I know abrupt stop, pls. be honest in u'r comments);)
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Ah. Thank you for your kind words, really appreciated. Heh, I'm trying to push my luck somewhere, hope it works out fine. :)

AND about your poem,

Worst poem of the year? No, not at all, can't be even nominated for that. =)

Feedback?

I really liked the combination of description in the simplest of words. And the ending, THE BEST.

I try not to use this well-worn word (anymore, people might've noticed =P ) but shall do so this once – the poem is “awesome”.

:)
 
Stancy Motha

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Epiphany said:
Ah. Thank you for your kind words, really appreciated. Heh, I'm trying to push my luck somewhere, hope it works out fine. :)

AND about your poem,

Worst poem of the year? No, not at all, can't be even nominated for that. =)

Feedback?

I really liked the combination of description in the simplest of words. And the ending, THE BEST.

I try not to use this well-worn word (anymore, people might've noticed =P ) but shall do so this once – the poem is “awesome”.

:)
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aww r u kidding me..u liked it???god!!! I am jumping up and down...they r likin it...woah!!
 
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Stancy Motha said:
ok so first poem I ever written in my enter life..yah..it kinda sucks... but I posted it so u ppl can recognise u'r talent wen u compare mine with u'rs...(y)
hey btw Epiphany....u r too gud man...I no cuz I never get gud poets...n I didn't get u even though u wrote in english...not offending u... I am serious...u hav a bright future in poetry...(y)

ok so here goes....the worst poem of the year...

so yet another challenge knocking at my door,
forced to accept, not reject and asked to go on with the flow.
off I go with my weapons, sweaty hands and a feeble mind,
and as I wait for that moment, I wish if I could rewind.

because as I stand here, I realize, beyond my tolerence was I forced,
every second, minute, hour, every step throughout my life.
not a decision have I made, with my own will and intellect.
and now I stand here just ashamed, as my thoughts and feelings they neglect.

all my life, simply did,what I was told like I were a tamed domestic animal.
but it's time things changed and I am treated fair and good,
time that I was realised, recognised and understood.

(sorry I know abrupt stop, pls. be honest in u'r comments);)
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wow its reeally nyc!! i mean its gt so much of depth and meaning....i lyk the theme:)
 
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