Song composing... =)

[agha saad]

robinhoodmustafa -lol...soo sorry 4 being soo l8!!

as requested TITLE=Y RoBiN

Hey Mr.Robin!
Opposite of boring
Overflowing awesomeness
Totally is bottomless

Y (then) Robin?
Did u crush that soul?
Did u lose control?
Was that u'r goal?
like- All a-long?

Worry not 4 we 4give n 4get
Once u show some regret

Now it's u'r Birthday so live it up
Hopin u got a gift better than an egg-cup

Challenges may build up and stand in u'r way
But don't u dare of think of backin away
Face them, n fight them
And gr8 mem's cherish them!

Sorry but that's all I got...

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Stancy Motha]

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think u qouted the wrong post....

 

[Rmarie-yum]

NO HE DIDINT!
girl its true this song roxxxxx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i should do it 2!
LoL

 

[agha saad]

I think u qouted the wrong post....

hahahahahaa i liked that thing boy wrote ^.^

NO HE DIDINT!
girl its true this song roxxxxx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i should do it 2!
LoL

hahahaha np np my intentions were different hahahahaha lolx

 

[agha saad]

http://saad.poetrycraze.com/

 

[robinhoodmustafa]

robinhoodmustafa -lol...soo sorry 4 being soo l8!!

as requested TITLE=Y RoBiN

Hey Mr.Robin!
Opposite of boring
Overflowing awesomeness
Totally is bottomless

Y (then) Robin?
Did u crush that soul?
Did u lose control?
Was that u'r goal?
like- All a-long?

Worry not 4 we 4give n 4get
Once u show some regret

Now it's u'r Birthday so live it up
Hopin u got a gift better than an egg-cup

Challenges may build up and stand in u'r way
But don't u dare of think of backin away
Face them, n fight them
And gr8 mem's cherish them!

AwW! Stancy That is best Poem you Wrote . So much Beautiful and readily defines me <3 <3 <3

 

[whitetiger64]

Rmarie-yum wow!!!! ur gifted!!!! beauuuuutiful!!!

I wrote once but i think it's pretty stupid and i realized i suck at composing......

 

[Amaya]

1. yo students​

   i am singing song​

   Chemistry song​

   flop song​

   why this chemistry chemistry di​

   
   
   
   Another y dis koleveri fan??
   

   why this chemistry chemistry di​

   rhythm correct​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   maintain please​

   why this chemistry.di​

   distance la paper paper​

   paper-u color-u white-u​

   white background night-u nigth-u​

   night-u color-u black-u​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   white skin-u paper -u paper-u​

   paper-u print out black-u​

   eyes-u eyes-u question meet-u​

   my future dark​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   why this chemistry chemistry chemistry di​

   Google mera notes lalo aur mera doudts bhi kar lo​

   pa pa paan pa pa paan pa pa paa pa pa paan​

   ache sey batao​

   super goggle ready​

   ready 1 2 3 4​

   whaa wat a change over google​

   ok goggle now tune change-u​

   hath mey pen​

   only english..​

   hand la pen​

   pen la refill​

   eyes-u full-aa tear-u​

   empty brain​

   friend-u come-u​

   life reverse gear-u​

   friend friend​

   oh ma friend​

   you showed me answer​

   sir-u sir-u oh ma sir-u​

   i want u hear now-u​

   god i m dying now-u​

   he is happy how-u​

   this song for soup studen​

   ​

 

[Amaya]

paridhi - koleveri fan!??

 

[Rmarie-yum]

omg! thankyou so much
it means the world to me that my songs are beautiful
because i need all the judgement i can get
and so far tthey are good reviews
i have 24 songs LoL
thankyou so much it really made me smile all over

 

[Spidey21]

umm i dont write lyrics as such but i guess so i do make interesting sounds with the guitar...

 

[Rmarie-yum]

This is my song about basically believing in Allah when your life seems to go wrong somehow but it never will be if you believe in Allah
Tell me what u think
I'd love to hear anything comment good or bad its fine
I need to improve my talent in anyway I can
Allah HafiZ=]

sweet and soft
like being stuck in your bedroom
hard and tough
like feeling empty on the inside
the doors open,shuts and close
the window panes across the wall
i feel like my life is ready to fall
but i still believe
inshallah inshallah
illl be okay someday
inshallah inshallah
inshallah inshallah
youll find your happiness someday
inshallah inshallah
youll be okay

when you feel empty and hurt inside
all your trust is broken down
what will you do when your in pain?
your life seems downhill
and never the same
will you turn Allah?
when your hurt inside
will you turn to Allah?
when you feel miserable tonight
dont be this way
its okay
pray to Allah and you will find your way
inshallah inshallah
illl be okay someday
inshallah inshallah
inshallah inshallah
youll find your happiness someday
inshallah inshallah
youll be okay

i remeber years ago
somebody out there
who i love the most
taught me how to pray
told me to believe
taught me how to keep faith
she's my mother and i see her in my dreams
and when she is gone
i dont cry to sleep
wake up at night
turn on the lights
La illahah il la lah
Mohammad ra rusullallah
its okay your find your way
everything will be okay
nshallah inshallah
illl be okay someday
inshallah inshallah
inshallah inshallah
youll find your happiness someday
inshallah inshallah
youll be okay

believe in Allah
and inshallah
youll find your way someday

 

[Experienced One]

I DO! I DO! i DO!!
tell me what you think
the song will sound better with my voice+piano
read slowly and youll get it
hope you like it

awesome
like? i laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaavvv itt xD
u got talents gurl

 

[Adzy1794]

Oh,so here's this discussion!! I sing and compose too Rmarie-yum your composition iss reaaaaaallly good,I like it would you mind if I put in some music with this and turn it into a rockin' song That would be great huh? Do you mind? I'll try to do a good job I've done compositions previously too but I lost the papers

 

[Rmarie-yum]

Oh,so here's this discussion!! I sing and compose too Rmarie-yum your composition iss reaaaaaallly good,I like it would you mind if I put in some music with this and turn it into a rockin' song That would be great huh? Do you mind? I'll try to do a good job I've done compositions previously too but I lost the papers

Wow I sing and compose too high five and u really tink its good woooooooooow thankyou so much that got me smiling for real thankyou thankyou
Oh I would looooove music with it I've been trying to make my own that would be wonderful if you could make that happen thankyou thankyou

Oh that's so sad that you lost the papers but its okay inshallah you will find your papers

 

[Adzy1794]

Ohh no problemo! Your work here is really good, i mean I had some totally different way of composing and it didn't turn out to be synchronised with the music well enough! Well,thanks a LOT for giving me permission. I'll soon find a suitable track that somewhat matches with your work and produce something with my singing! Waisey if you would sing this with the music I'm about to take then it would be really nice but nevertheless,I'll do it and show you soon

 

[Adzy1794]

I DO! I DO! i DO!!
tell me what you think
the song will sound better with my voice+piano
read slowly and youll get it
hope you like it

i tick and tock and all my tears are falling,keep falling
left and right and blood on my wall is dripping,keeps dripping
up and down. i cant touch the ground
back and forth and still no sound
but honestly i dont need a GPS
i been told to go through so many directions

some people tell me give up and go back
some people tell me have hope and climb up
but how can i do it when people keep holding me down??

IVE BEEN lost around the world
people just think of me as just another girl (woah)
i try and try to make people happy
but i guess im not that perfect
so what ifi try?
do i just drop my bags and turn around?

some people tell me give up and go back
some people tell me have hope and climb up
but how can i do it when people keep holding me down??

nOrth,south people pull me down
east,west people light me up
north,south people throw me out
east,west people laugh out loud
so many people so many doubts
up,down cant touch the ground
back,forth not a single sound

i tick and tock and all my tears are falling,keep falling
left and right and blood on my wall is dripping,keeps dripping
is there somewhere for me in this world?
holding on but wana shut down
cant i go east to west
without going to north and south
all my life ive been told to go through so many directions.........
cant i go wherever i ant without any consequences?

some people tell me give up and go back
some people tell me have hope and climb up
but how can i do it when people keep holding me down?? (have to hold me down)

someday ill face a new direction
someday ill see a brighter light
maybe a place for me
without people telling me where i have to go
i dont wana go up and down
not back and forth for people throw me out
east and west cant pull me up just hold me

tears may fall and i go down
bood will drip without a sound
but all i wana do
is go where i wana go
be where i wana be
without some people telling me where i have to go

Hey I think I'll take this one for the track okay? and IF it doesn't synchronise very well with the track I MIGHT have to change the words just a little bit okay but the thing is and will be originally written by youuu

 

[Adzy1794]

I was working on a composition a few days back and now I'm done. Hopefully, I'll try to compose this into a song too just like I'm trying to compose @Rmarie-yum's work so here goes:

I went away and broke your heart
you be praying everyday
never did I find a reason to break your heart
but all the possibilities aim towards a terrible catastrophe
That night when I saw that notebook under your bed
scribbled and torn....I fell apart
I fell apart from the time we spent together watching the stars

Now that I'm helpless where are you gone now
Often, my thoughts are behind the bars, my brain numbed by your absense
Was it just time? Was it just the time? Was it the cause?

 

[Rmarie-yum]

I was working on a composition a few days back and now I'm done. Hopefully, I'll try to compose this into a song too just like I'm trying to compose @Rmarie-yum's work so here goes:

I went away and broke your heart
you be praying everyday
never did I find a reason to break your heart
but all the possibilities aim towards a terrible catastrophe
That night when I saw that notebook under your bed
scribbled and torn....I fell apart
I fell apart from the time we spent together watching the stars

Now that I'm helpless where are you gone now
Often, my thoughts are behind the bars, my brain numbed by your absense
Was it just time? Was it just the time? Was it the cause?

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
PPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGG
THIS IS AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
okay im sooooooooooooo out of words but this is just awesome

 

[Adzy1794]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
PPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGG
THIS IS AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
okay im sooooooooooooo out of words but this is just awesome

Not again Haha,thanks a ton