Urdu problem........

[princessa 42]

i needd to write an article on amal say zindagi banti hai jahanum bhi or janat bhi ...... dont know wha to write plz helppp

 

[Faizan Muhammmad]

pahlay to shair complete karo
amal say zindagi bantee hai janat bhee jahanum bhee
yah khakee apnee qismat main na nooree hai na nari
us kay baad aik para tashree kardo
phir 1-2 examples do ,qaid-e-azam etc
koi chotee see inspirational story bhee chalay gee
phir mehnat kee importance ki taraf aa jao
kaam choree kay nuqsaanat
conclusion : insaan ko apnee taqdeer ka likha hee milta hai laikin justujoo karnee parti hai (hazrat ali ka qol hai shaid), mehnat say taqdeer badlee ja saktee hai etc.

 

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pahlay to shair complete karo
amal say zindagi bantee hai janat bhee jahanum bhee
yah khakee apnee qismat main na nooree hai na nari
us kay baad aik para tashree kardo
phir 1-2 examples do ,qaid-e-azam etc
koi chotee see inspirational story bhee chalay gee
phir mehnat kee importance ki taraf aa jao
kaam choree kay nuqsaanat
conclusion : insaan ko apnee taqdeer ka likha hee milta hai laikin justujoo karnee parti hai (hazrat ali ka qol hai shaid), mehnat say taqdeer badlee ja saktee hai etc.

jo misra aap ne likha hai.... I think its "fitrat mein" not "qismat mein". Correct me if im wrong.

 

[princessa 42]

hello guys i need to write an article on this not on ur shair

 

[Faizan Muhammmad]

jo misra aap ne likha hai.... I think its "fitrat mein" not "qismat mein". Correct me if im wrong.

yes you are right
also there is hai in the end as well
yah khakee apnee fitrat main na nooree hai na nari hai
sorry

 

[***amd***]

i needd to write an article on amal say zindagi banti hai jahanum bhi or janat bhi ...... dont know wha to write plz helppp

when is the compition? I would love to write but my exams are on, if it is after 9 oct I may be able to write, if it is after 25 oct I will definitely write it for you

 

[princessa 42]

when is the compition? I would love to write but my exams are on, if it is after 9 oct I may be able to write, if it is after 25 oct I will definitely write it for you

its on 24 oct kindly help

 

[***amd***]

its on 24 oct kindly help

I will do it In Shaa Allah, but after 9 oct if you can wait.