WHEN

[ImuxInc]

Its sometimes is so annoying
How this world sometimes works
Dont you at times feel that it sometimes isnt right
Dont you at times feel the stab of the forks
But this thing in the world
Lets say the evil's might
Its so powerful,so evident,so dominant
Yet cant the people around see it
Around us there's a lot of injustice
That the people usually practice
Yet the people around,in their own world,lazy
Criticize people who care calling themcrazy
The same 'crazy' people care for them
Dont do stuff-that stupid injustice-they make sure that they dont
They cut to avoid it
Bleed to avoid it
Scars etched deep on their arms-lasting forever-a thing they can never forget
Thank you retarded people
for calling such people crazy
They wouldnt stop, i guess never!!
When will the world see the light
when will they see what is right
We couldnt help but just keep on asking 'when?'
When,when and when

 

[étudiante]

WOW!!! nycie dude..... its relle nyc..... n true sadly

 

[awsumness]

 

[DANGERBP]

heh i like it ! =p

 

[ImuxInc]

This is from myy point of view and i meant literally about everything i saidd..

 

[HauteHijabii]

...its nyc...did u ryt it??

 

[ImuxInc]

...its nyc...did u ryt it??

you temme whatcha thinkk?

 

[HauteHijabii]

wel, it uz sound like u coz well,it is pretty sad...nyc one
guess if u ryt lyk dis u can ace your english tests

 

[ImuxInc]

wel, it uz sound like u coz well,it is pretty sad...nyc one
guess if u ryt lyk dis u can ace your english tests

well,just cuz its sad,it sounds like me? haha....well,Englishh is my strongest subject,but i really dont ace it...i'mm average..B-C grade student..

 

[HauteHijabii]

 

[HauteHijabii]

btw i think ur first sentence is supposed to be like ' It's sometimes so annoying' - without the 'is'.
or maybe ' it sometimes is so annoying' ma friend just pointed dat out

 

[ImuxInc]

Like i said,i'm average..i make mistakes..i have 2 more stuff by me on here...

 

[ImuxInc]

Btw,it wa just a typing mistake
my aplogies...;p

 

[HauteHijabii]

np...
everybody has it...

 

[whitetiger64]

wow really amazing! I think its ur best frm the three ....u hav a really gd talent!

 

[ImuxInc]

Why thank you! xD

 

[whitetiger64]

welcum....btw do u right poems abt othr things as well? or is it lyk wen ur upset all ur extr enrgy is chanelled into a poem??? cuz i do dt sumtyms...helps take my mind of things!

 

[Narcotic]

u r a gr8 poet!! y dnt u post it in thread "poetry"
btw true words

 

[ImuxInc]

welcum....btw do u right poems abt othr things as well? or is it lyk wen ur upset all ur extr enrgy is chanelled into a poem??? cuz i do dt sumtyms...helps take my mind of things!

kinda bothh..but i guess i can write it anytime,anywhete...all you gotta do is use your imaginations and the stuff around ya

@ Narcotic: my aplogies, madame.idk where that is

 

[Narcotic]

@ Narcotic: my aplogies, madame.idk where that is

ur apologies accepted
http://www.xtremepapers.com/community/threads/poetry-p.12112/page-6