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the 2nd question is wrong in terms of examination. It must be a 'why' reason.The second question is for 7 marks.
Actually in the second question I was a bit confused. I have Nigel Kelly's book and he only explained tat you need to write 3 reasons to a 'why' question of seven marks.
In the third mark question were my points right and did I miss anything?
I'll try to post the same answer as soon as possible.
Thanks . I tried doing the second question again but I simply couldn't.the 2nd question is wrong in terms of examination. It must be a 'why' reason.
ur points for 3rd question are all correct and enough.
there are only these 3 books most prominent for exam preparation. especially nigel kelly's is the most common one but nigel smith's must also be read in order to completely cover syllabus for cie.Go and read Nigel Kelly, Nigel Smith and the Bajwa book. Thats where A* holders read all of it from
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marked answers comments:
1. 4/4, complete 4 valid points, good work!
2. The first three paragraphs are just copied from nigel kely's book, which is quite disappointing for me. Although it doesn't really matter to examiner from where u copied but this practice is useless. So i would not consider this part of answer. Read carefully the comments on this answer in the book. The next two paras are totally relevant and well developed. Considering both these paras, u get 5-6/7. If I mark ur 3rd para as well, it can be upto 7/7. So even if you ommited the first two paras, ur answer would be still much better.
3. As there is no special priority given to any event in this question, it would be better if u had written down in chronological order. Write success and failures in different paragraphs, creating a link between them. This will shape your answer more better. You have covered all the major points well so it should be 11-12/14.
You would have scored 13-14 if u had structured ur answer well by writing in paras every success and failure and linking the paragraphs with the previous ones.
at most of the points, I think that u have just copied word to word from book. I am in doubt that u r just writing the answer without understanding or it is all ratafied. try to write in your own simple words and focus on structuring answers, especially 14 marks.
Isn't there an e-book or something?there are only these 3 books most prominent for exam preparation. especially nigel kelly's is the most common one but nigel smith's must also be read in order to completely cover syllabus for cie.
The first point. How exactly do you elaborate it?answers tonur asked questions
1. those 3 points r correct.
2. first discuss the creation of Pakistan as an achievement. Then cover the following:
- 14 points
- day of delievarance
- pakistan resolution
- failure of cripps mission, gandhi-jinnah talks etc. (progress towards pakistan movemenet)
- 1945 election
u will briefly tell about the tireless work of jinnah for making the appearantly impossible possible. giving muslims a great platform, he fought on behalf of muslims for independence in the most tough circumstances. Covincing british n hindus for pakistan and then accepting the challange for making it prosper is itself a great achievemnt.The first point. How exactly do you elaborate it?
''Jinnah was finally able to create Pakistan in 14 August 1947. He not only managed to create Pakistan but also ensured that it prospered .''
And then what?
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