- Messages
- 145
- Reaction score
- 120
- Points
- 53
Ok what grade will I get with this response:
Questions;
Paper=http://papers.xtremepapers.com/CIE/...sh - First Language (0500)/0500_s12_qp_23.pdf
Marke scheme;http://papers.xtremepapers.com/CIE/...sh - First Language (0500)/0500_s12_ms_23.pdf
For q2 this was my response
The writer creates an effect that the forest and bee hives are fantastical yet frightening. The first way the writer makes the forest seem frightening is by describing it as 'gnarled'. This word gnarled adds an image of fright because the word means something old and twisted. When the writer uses 'darkened discs' to describe a bee hive, he implies that they are unreal as a disc defies our presumption of a bee hive. The writer further emphasis the fantastical effect of the hives by describing it as shimmering and pulsating'. Pulsating indicates something that is expanding and contracting, once again creating an image of something frightening.
This is just part a but so far can i get an a
Questions;
Paper=http://papers.xtremepapers.com/CIE/...sh - First Language (0500)/0500_s12_qp_23.pdf
Marke scheme;http://papers.xtremepapers.com/CIE/...sh - First Language (0500)/0500_s12_ms_23.pdf
For q2 this was my response
The writer creates an effect that the forest and bee hives are fantastical yet frightening. The first way the writer makes the forest seem frightening is by describing it as 'gnarled'. This word gnarled adds an image of fright because the word means something old and twisted. When the writer uses 'darkened discs' to describe a bee hive, he implies that they are unreal as a disc defies our presumption of a bee hive. The writer further emphasis the fantastical effect of the hives by describing it as shimmering and pulsating'. Pulsating indicates something that is expanding and contracting, once again creating an image of something frightening.
This is just part a but so far can i get an a