Poetry! =P

[***amd***]

apni to chhat salamat hai, auron ki pehchan kisay!
fikr to hai apni sari dikhta hai nadaan kisay!

hr aah-e-dard talab karti hai, madad ik hath ki
hm jab aagay nikal gaye hein pichhlon ka dhyan kise!

dunya me rehne ki gharz se dunya hi se larna parta he
bazi kuch sakht he, dekho zara, milti he fatah ki shaan kise?
(mine)

 

[étudiante]

***amd*** Ur poetry is just toooooooooooooooooooooooooo good *o* LOVING it @_@

 

[danial 234]

You say that you love rain,
but you open your umbrella when it rains...
You say that you love the sun,
but you find a shadow spot when the sun shines...
You say that you love the wind,
But you close your windows when wind blows...
This is why I am afraid;
You say that you love me too...

 

[shazmina]

You say that you love rain,
but you open your umbrella when it rains...
You say that you love the sun,
but you find a shadow spot when the sun shines...
You say that you love the wind,
But you close your windows when wind blows...
This is why I am afraid;
You say that you love me too...

woooooooooooooooooooooooooow...dis is just soo amazing broo masha allah...u wrt dt????
im so mch in luv wid it now :0

 

[danial 234]

woooooooooooooooooooooooooow...dis is just soo amazing broo masha allah...u wrt dt????
im so mch in luv wid it now :0

sry. i didnt write dat. it ws a turkish poem Korkuyorum

 

[shazmina]

sry. i didnt write dat. it ws a turkish poem Korkuyorum

but its srsly amazing bro...masha allah....u knw..u hv de talents to cm up wid sumthing lk dis bro???

 

[danial 234]

but its srsly amazing bro...masha allah....u knw..u hv de talents to cm up wid sumthing lk dis bro???

i nvr tried

 

[shazmina]

i nvr tried

den u shud defa try sumthing

 

[danial 234]

kk

 

[***amd***]

***amd*** Ur poetry is just toooooooooooooooooooooooooo good *o* LOVING it @_@

can I ask what does your user name mean? I don't think its english.

 

[***amd***]

paradoX error, étudiante , 1357911, danial 234, and for everyone who liked my poetry.

mere muqaddar abhi kal to tu meri mutthi me tha qaid,
aaj me najaane tere hi isharon ka ghulaam kaisay?

ay meri zuban! tu to paband thi bari mere ilfaz ki,
aj me khud ulajh sa gya hun, lagaun me tujhko lagam kaise?
(mine)

An abstract of a premature poem, the previous ones were the latest.

 

[étudiante]

can I ask what does your user name mean? I don't think its english.

No its French And it means Student ^_^

 

[danial 234]

paradoX error, étudiante , 1357911 ,,shazmina , danial 234, and for everyone who liked my poetry.

mere muqaddar abhi kal to tu meri mutthi me tha qaid,
aaj me najaane tere hi isharon ka ghulaam kaisay?

ay meri zuban! tu to paband thi bari mere ilfaz ki,
aj me khud ulajh sa gya hun, lagaun me tujhko lagam kaise?
(mine)

An extract of a premature poem, the previous ones were the latest.

Nice one

 

[***amd***]

No its French And it means Student ^_^

elleh! people here dont even understand urdu, and you have started french.

 

[Ikram Khaliq]

Anyone who enjoys reading poems or even better writes poems? Anyone? =P

me! why?

 

[Ikram Khaliq]

Check out my page !
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Ikrams-Poetry-and-Photography/289929584354625

 

[***amd***]

paradoX error, étudiante , 1357911 ,,shazmina , danial 234

apne ehsas se chhu kr mujhe sandal kar do
me k sadion se adhoora hun mukammal kr do

(I don't remember the poet's name)

 

[danial 234]

paradoX error, étudiante , 1357911 ,,shazmina, danial 234

apne ehsas se chhu kr mujhe sandal kar do
me k sadion se adhoora hun mukammal kr do

(I don't remember the poet's name)

nyc. perhaps its wasi shah

 

[***amd***]

nyc. perhaps its wasi shah

Yes, its definitely him.

 

[***amd***]

paradoX error, étudiante , 1357911 ,,shazmina , danial 234

ye taqat ye qismat ye kamanein fuzul hein sari
ho himmat gr ragon mein to dewarein bhi jhuk jati hein
(me)