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Mera Us Shehr e Adawat Mein Basera Hai
jahaan Log Sajdon Men Bhi Logon Ka Bura Sochtay Hain ...

 

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Azab-e-Deed Main Aankhen Lahu Lahu Kar K,
Main Sharam-Saar Hua Teri Justuju Kar K...

 

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meri zindgi to faraq hai, wo azal sei dil mein makin sahi
wo nigah e shoak ei door hain, rag o jaan sei lakh qareen sahi

mujey jaan deni hai aik din, wo kisi tarah wo kabhi sahi
mujey aap khenchiye dar pr, jo nahi koi to mujey sahi

tera dar to na hum ko mil saka teri rah guzar ki zameen sahi
humein sajda krney sei kaam hai jo nahi wahan t yahin sahi

meri zindagi a naseeb hai nahi door mujsey qareeb hai
mujey uss ka gham to naseeb hai agar wo nahi to nahi sahi

na ho us pei kuch mera bas nahi kei yei ashqi hai hawas nai
mein inka tha mein inhi ka hun wo merey nahi to nahi sahi

jo ho faisal wo sunaye, iss hashar pr na utha ye
jo krein gey aap sitam wahan wo abhi sahi wo yahin sahi

mujey bheitney ki jaga miley meri aarzo ka bharam rahey
teri anjuman mein agar nai teri anjuman kei qareen sahi

unhein dekhney ki jo luh lagi jo naseer dekh hi lein gey hum
wo hazaar aankh sei door hun wo hazar parda nasheen sahi.

 

[ZaqZainab]

Palestine is going through a lot and they need support
Stop it Israel another bomb you better not -.-

Pray for the best
May they pass this test

I shed a tear
Oh Israel God you must fear!!

Its time things get right
Lets do it
Even if we have to fight
We shall not quit take them down every bit
And bring back light
#Ownmade

 

[chishtyguy]

Jawab-e-Shikwa ;')

 

[chishtyguy]

Level of Hypocrisy....

 

[chishtyguy]

 

[Maganius]

 

[My Name]

if any one is interested in deep poems
follow this link
http://poetry.com/poets/397437-Maria Husain/
(poet = friend of mine)

do like comment and give review and ur opinion
fair critisism very much appreciated

enjoy

 

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[***amd***]

Parh Parh Kitaaban Ilam Diyan Tu Naam Rakh Liya QAAZI,

Hath Vich Phar Ke Talvaar Tu Naam Rakh Liya GHAZI,

Makkay Madinay Ghoom Aaya Tay Tu Naam Rakh Liya HAAJI,

BULLAH SHAH Haasil Ki Kita?

Je Tu Yaar Na Rakhya RAAZI !​

correction: Bulleyah, hasil ki kitta, jay tu rab na kitta razi (last one)
F.Z.M. 7

 

[F.Z.M. 7]

correction: Bulleyah, hasil ki kitta, jay tu rab na kitta razi (last one)
F.Z.M. 7

Objection Denied
Bulleh Shahs most poetry has been carried on orally, there are many versions hence
though they mean the same thing technically

 

[***amd***]

Objection Denied
Bulleh Shahs most poetry has been carried on orally, there are many versions hence
though they mean the same thing technically

but if you consider the fact that Bellah's poetry was more towards sufism, dont you think writing "jay rabb na kitta razi" will do better?

 

[F.Z.M. 7]

but if you consider the fact that Bellah's poetry was more towards sufism, dont you think writing "jay rabb na kitta razi" will do better?

if you do consider the fact that in many places he mentioned rab as yar then it does better already