Short Story Competition

[Rutzaba]

the story is nice but the thrill is missing. andit stoooooo longo

 

[SOTZAIDI]

Okay okay

it will weigh ur stry down. trust me. now i can even read normally bout a person being cut to peices. but not beaten up witha hammer. honestly i was feeling sum pain wen i read it. these things totally torture ur mind while near me the whole point of reading fiction is enjoyment... now in my mind i will think that uhave a certain way of writing and wont read ur stories next tym assuming it contains gore only if i am a reader.get thingswch ppl like, even if there is a twist... make it humanly. i dunno how to explain... your stry could have been for sme other sin... abortion again is a sensitive issue and shud not be brought into a stry wch is meant to be enjoyed. i meanit cd have been anyyyyyyyyyything in the whole wide world,, but u chose sumthing... odd. try to write bout things that ppl can relate to. that ppl enjoy

I get it. you want mild horror. No problem... I have been reading too much Stephen King these days so its natural
I'll write for enjoyment next time

 

[SOTZAIDI]

I

it will weigh ur stry down. trust me. now i can even read normally bout a person being cut to peices. but not beaten up witha hammer. honestly i was feeling sum pain wen i read it. these things totally torture ur mind while near me the whole point of reading fiction is enjoyment... now in my mind i will think that uhave a certain way of writing and wont read ur stories next tym assuming it contains gore only if i am a reader.get thingswch ppl like, even if there is a twist... make it humanly. i dunno how to explain... your stry could have been for sme other sin... abortion again is a sensitive issue and shud not be brought into a stry wch is meant to be enjoyed. i meanit cd have been anyyyyyyyyyything in the whole wide world,, but u chose sumthing... odd. try to write bout things that ppl can relate to. that ppl enjoy

wrote it while I was nearing sleep so I had no idea on the whole what I was writing And I do like to read gory violent horror story even if they are mine

 

[SOTZAIDI]

Why don

it will weigh ur stry down. trust me. now i can even read normally bout a person being cut to peices. but not beaten up witha hammer. honestly i was feeling sum pain wen i read it. these things totally torture ur mind while near me the whole point of reading fiction is enjoyment... now in my mind i will think that uhave a certain way of writing and wont read ur stories next tym assuming it contains gore only if i am a reader.get thingswch ppl like, even if there is a twist... make it humanly. i dunno how to explain... your stry could have been for sme other sin... abortion again is a sensitive issue and shud not be brought into a stry wch is meant to be enjoyed. i meanit cd have been anyyyyyyyyyything in the whole wide world,, but u chose sumthing... odd. try to write bout things that ppl can rela
I'll write RL Stine level story now

 

[Rutzaba]

Okay okay

I get it. you want mild horror. No problem... I have been reading too much Stephen King these days so its natural
I'll write for enjoyment next time

i mean may be i dun like that much gore. its ok though u write for urself

 

[SOTZAIDI]

yES i GUESS. bUT THAT IS THE START OF Tombstone Grady, his later stories are much more darker, with much more horror, suspense and gore and solid storyline. I'll post them one of these days

the story is nice but the thrill is missing. andit stoooooo longo

 

[Rutzaba]

post yourown work here only... its a competition as we know it

 

[Muhammad TAimoor]

"by an hammer" .

By "a" hammer.
Same fb mistake

 

[Rutzaba]

By "a" hammer.
Same fb mistake

tum mat chorna usko

 

[SOTZAIDI]

Oh

By "a" hammer.
Same fb mistake

bhai tez tez type kartey hoye hojati hai ghalti. Tum school to ao kal. Tmhen men batata hon. Is ke bad aaaah.... ahhhh karo gay

 

[SOTZAIDI]

Tombstone Grady is my pseudonym for horror gory and explicit content stories just like Stephen King had Richard Back man for more gore. This is my story Rutzaba.

post yourown work here only... its a competition as we know it

 

[Rutzaba]

guys my internets down so this comp will come alive after ten days i think
or shall i give the topic and post my stry afta ten eleven days?

 

[SOTZAIDI]

Question for u all?
What kind of writer has a more solid ground and a strong fan base : Higher Fantasy like Lord of the Rings and Chronicles of Narnia Game of Thrones
Science FIction: Artemis FOwl
Horror: Darren Shan Saga and Stephen King novels
or the detective story writer

 

[Rutzaba]

sir arthur conan doyle<3

 

[SOTZAIDI]

No doubt about Sherlock Holmes here

 

[SOTZAIDI]

Well

guys my internets down so this comp will come alive after ten days i think
or shall i give the topic and post my stry afta ten eleven days?

then can I suggest a new topic........

 

[Muhammad TAimoor]

Post the topic, nobody writes too quick!
People will take time

 

[Rutzaba]

and the topic happens to be my dp!

 

[SOTZAIDI]

Ok of you WIsh.... Please dont make them tooo9ooo long. Medium length would be fine



*IT WAS THE THIRD MURDER IN AS MANY DAYS*

I am back Boys and girls and soon will be up with a gory sickening story on this or perhaps as soon as soon allowes me to be

 

[SOTZAIDI]

Always your DP... Why can't we have someone else's DP

and the topic happens to be my dp!