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i have the bad habbit of dragging everything. I could have tried to put some more effort into that bones part I'll try better in the second partok your writing is vry very organised... im a bit of a critic so my saying that your writing is organized means sumthing though your topic... it is not out of rules this is a very casual thread... but maybe its me..... couldnt keep my attention for more than haalf the story. all in all you have great potential... but your stories need to be more interesting