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[rajvansh]

Hey ppl , i need some help.
I wrote on topic 5 in eassy."an unexpected arrival at the airport"
I wrote that i had a flight next day but i was kidnapped.fortunately i managed to escape them and arrived at the airport on time.
Is this story correct ..?

 

[pakisatan123]

in speech werent we supposed to write about plants some people saying here envirnomental project??

 

[Fallen316]

in speech werent we supposed to write about plants some people saying here envirnomental project??

its been 4 days now since english p1 .. get over it.
you have a more difficult exam tomorrow.

 

[haha101]

haha soo truee fallen

 

[GrunT]

Hey ppl , i need some help.
I wrote on topic 5 in eassy."an unexpected arrival at the airport"
I wrote that i had a flight next day but i was kidnapped.fortunately i managed to escape them and arrived at the airport on time.
Is this story correct ..?

I don't think its correct, you were supposed to write about someone's arrival at the airport, not you arriving at the right time.

 

[GrunT]

I was wondering, will I be penalized for not leaving lines while doing paragraphing ? I have a habit of not leaving lines, instead I give some space from the margin and start from the very next line.

 

[rajvansh]

I don't think its correct, you were supposed to write about someone's arrival at the airport, not you arriving at the right time.

The topic was "an unexpected arrival at the airport"
So that would mean my arrival to.every would have written about their relative or a plane hijack, i decided to think outside tht box and write a different stroy.
My stry has an arrival at the airport which is unexpected so it should be correct!

 

[Asmi]

i exceeded the word limit of my speech...will they deduct marks because of it???????
i did the neighbour wala topic and wrote how i am in the hospital with cancer and my father who i had fought with 10 years ago came to see after all this time....we talk and he takes me out of the room however the nurse doesnt notice me at all and then my neighbour who takes care of me comes and passes me without saying a word...i follow him agitated into my room where the nurse is pulling a white cloth over my body . i am dead and so is my father and he came to get me....
HOW IS IT?????DO REPLY!!!


also now that the paper 2 has passes to .....tell e ke summary me 175 words likhne se marks deduct honge???????????
AND WHAT were the 2 opinions in summary's question????

 

[Jaguar]

For the two opinions I wrote:
(i) The 'sale..blah blah' suggest...robot-like attitude
(ii) It is (disappointing?) ....image...that baby are pushed in...computer..idk

 

[Fallen316]

i exceeded the word limit of my speech...will they deduct marks because of it???????
i did the neighbour wala topic and wrote how i am in the hospital with cancer and my father who i had fought with 10 years ago came to see after all this time....we talk and he takes me out of the room however the nurse doesnt notice me at all and then my neighbour who takes care of me comes and passes me without saying a word...i follow him agitated into my room where the nurse is pulling a white cloth over my body . i am dead and so is my father and he came to get me....
HOW IS IT?????DO REPLY!!!


also now that the paper 2 has passes to .....tell e ke summary me 175 words likhne se marks deduct honge???????????
AND WHAT were the 2 opinions in summary's question????

opinions: 1. it is depressing to see when parents with their long faces push their children into yet another computer shop ( i dont remember exactly )
2. shopping suggests silly,robot-like behaviour

what were the two examples of valuable recreational excursions ?
i wrote museum and book fair/library.

 

[Jaguar]

and i wrote my answer, the one "explain in your own words"
THREAT: danger
FATALITY: severity/death

 

[Fallen316]

and i wrote my answer, the one "explain in your own words"
THREAT: danger
FATALITY: severity/death

same here .. the danger of death had been removed

 

[Jaguar]

but i wasn't very sure about the two aspects of behaviour.

 

[rajvansh]

same here .. the danger of death had been removed

this means that she was out of danger, this is also correct right ..?

 

[Jaguar]

this means that she was out of danger, this is also correct right ..?

probably 1 mark only. too bad i wrote death but i cancelled it out and changed it to severity

 

[rajvansh]

probably 1 mark only. too bad i wrote death but i cancelled it out and changed it to severity

why 1 mark , i wrote 1 more point tht the danger was eradicated after that.

 

[Fallen316]

this means that she was out of danger, this is also correct right ..?

nup , they were talking about her baby , the sentence was THREAT of FRATILITY had been removed,and life went back to normal (it was something like that)
to which you had to write the same sentence, just replace the words
the DANGER of DEATH had been removed..

 

[rajvansh]

S

nup , they were talking about her baby , the sentence was THREAT of FRATILITY had been removed,and life went back to normal (it was something like that)
to which you had to write the same sentence, just replace the words
the DANGER of DEATH had been removed..

she was out of danger also means the same dued.!

 

[Fallen316]

S

she was out of danger also means the same dued.!

alright mate, i dont wanna argue . YOU WIN

 

[Jaguar]

were there three possible answers for the behaviour that show her nervousness after she was told her baby was well?
(i) she stood dumbly
(ii) she got round asking whether she could see her baby
or
(iii) she cried copiously ??????