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ENGLISH 0580 PAPER21 IS DONE

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There are two main major common mistakes in this paper..
1) short comp. - the second or third Q was the biggest economy industry to the island , the answer was "tourism" not "banana export" because it clearly said in the second paragraph "After tourism, the banana export was the biggest .... "
2) in the form filling exercise - u had to tick the "none" because the trick was in the Q "how many times did she go as a VOLUNTEER" apparently she went many times before but she was never a VOLUNTEER she was a visitor .. This time was her first time as a VOLUNTEER.
Cheers :)
 
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wrote all the same except for the problems were i wrote:- rules are not yet set / -injuries/ -that thing cannot fly unlike in Harry Potter
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
YOU ACTUALLY WROTE THAT AS A PROBLEM??
that was written for the sake of fun man !
 
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HEYYY! can anyone tell the answer for the last question in the 2nd comprehension?? the advantages to the farmers or sth .. PLZ
 
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does anyone remember the points of the summary?
and what did you write about the first bullet in the letter?
 
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Agriculture, different life styles, inequality of food distribution between people, Malnutrients such as vitamins, saving energy and technology plus computers
 
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i don't no it's a bit weak !! i mean the idea you clean up the city and collect money , hoow ????
 
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i don't no it's a bit weak !! i mean the idea you clean up the city and collect money , hoow ????

well we are basically cleaning up areas and letting people over there know about our purpose ,i.e, raising money for a charity....so they donate for that in return + i mentioned that a lot of littering had anyways been going on in the city for a long time and people have been complaining abt its unhygienic state lately...so this act of ours even pleased the local council who also donated......
 
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when i wrote my letter i realised tht i exceeded the word limit
so i striked it
and wrote it again in the blank page and clearly indicated so
but will this cutting effect my grade??
 
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