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English Paper 1

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For number 4, the title is already given!?
Say yes!:D
Because i put it as the title.--'
Usually when i'm given a single word, i put it as the title and my teachers never said anything...

AND i thought that discussing a paper which has already been done was a bad thing to do as this might affect our upcoming papers ^^'
But i can't help it!0.0
 
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its been 24 hrs and now u can discuss. Yes topic 4 said it all. But ive discovered that it is ok even if u dont write a title at all just write the topic number.
 
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rose1700 said:
To the pricipal

12th october ,2010

Dear sir,
______________________
_____________________
_____________________
_____________________
______________________
______________________

Name





the above is the correct format of the account to pricipal :)


this was not a letter, it was a formal report. it did not require dear sir.
 
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examman said:
Damn. How many marks are we subject to loose if we wrote like the following :

12th October 2010

To the principal, sir, as..........................................
......................................................................
......................................................................

......................................................................
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Yours Sincerely,

(sign) <----I actually did sign my signature here ! will that be wrong ?
Examman

you actually wrote in the form of a letter. you might lose a couple of marks. you are not supposed to add the 'personal touch' in accounts.
 
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Tra said:
For number 4, the title is already given!?
Say yes!:D
Because i put it as the title.--'
Usually when i'm given a single word, i put it as the title and my teachers never said anything...

AND i thought that discussing a paper which has already been done was a bad thing to do as this might affect our upcoming papers ^^'
But i can't help it!0.0


if you have given the number , then it's alright
but if you have not given number and not given the tittle even .
then it would lead you to a big problem !
 
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yousafs c said:
rose1700 said:
To the pricipal

12th october ,2010

Dear sir,
______________________
_____________________
_____________________
_____________________
______________________
______________________

Name





the above is the correct format of the account to pricipal :)


this was not a letter, it was a formal report. it did not require dear sir.


dear is a formal word and could be used over here
 
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yousafs c said:
examman said:
Damn. How many marks are we subject to loose if we wrote like the following :

12th October 2010

To the principal, sir, as..........................................
......................................................................
......................................................................

......................................................................
......................................................................

......................................................................
......................................................................
Yours Sincerely,

(sign) <----I actually did sign my signature here ! will that be wrong ?
Examman

you actually wrote in the form of a letter. you might lose a couple of marks. you are not supposed to add the 'personal touch' in accounts.

:|
SO I WILL LOOSE A LOT OF MARKS :(
why cant we put the sincerely ? i just dont get it :|
 
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rose1700 said:
yousafs c said:
rose1700 said:
To the pricipal

12th october ,2010

Dear sir,
______________________
_____________________
_____________________
_____________________
______________________
______________________

Name





the above is the correct format of the account to pricipal :)


this was not a letter, it was a formal report. it did not require dear sir.


dear is a formal word and could be used over here

No doubt dear is a formal word, but it is inappropriate for reports. You may ask any teacher.
 
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there is no CORRECT format
a wide range of formats are acceptable!
but this seemd to be a letter
 
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yeah............hey everybody..dont get worried about ur format........they accept varying formats n they say that THEY CONCENTRATE MORE ON THE TEXT i.e. what u have written in the short composition. SO NO WORRIES. :D ...........
 
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Please Say If These Are Correct Or Wrong. Or how it should be done

If we wrote the first paragraph starting along with to the principal. Will it be wrong? example below.
To the Principal, Sir, As you.......................

Should we put the date above the main writings? example below.
12th October 2010
<there is a space of one line here>
To the principal, Sir, As you.......


After writing the whole "account" putting yours sincerely at the bottom then signing it? example below.
..................<this is the ending paragraphs last sentence>..........................
<there is a space of one line here>
Yours Sincerely,
(sign)
Examman.


BTW, DO WE HAVE TO ADD A TOPIC ALSO? EXAMPLE BELOW.
Subject: An account of a quarrel between two boys in the canteen.

------Please Respond And Clear The Folowing Doubts. It would not only help me but many others too :) --------
 
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ur last one is correct.........n as they themselves directed to start with To the principal so the first one might also be correct......but i have doubts abut the second one.
 
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yeah
they themselves said to start with To the principal. I did not write
To the : Principal
because they said like that and if they wanted me to write like that they must ask me to write like to the : principal :|
 
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but i dont think that the second one z correct as they said to start with To the principal,so starting with the date may be wrong.
 
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ya!! u cant start with the date.
and yours sincerely is also not correct! You are not supposed to add the PERSONAL touch to the account. such as yours sincerely, or in my opinion, etc.
 
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