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Poetry! =P

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Midnight dream said:
app bhi koi shair suna dain.... :p
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Hamain aap ki tarah likhna NAHI aataa :p....I did write an Urdu poem back in Feb
But I think abhi kay liye... I'll show you what I wrote latest :)....(randomly wrote it yesterday)

When I walk in the memory lane.....
there are places where I wish to live again...

But when the pain and sorrow I see...
I wish nothing but just to flee...

aapkee shairee say to for sure no comparison!​
 
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My Name said:
Hamain aap ki tarah likhna NAHI aataa :p....I did write an Urdu poem back in Feb
But I think abhi kay liye... I'll show you what I wrote latest :)....(randomly wrote it yesterday)

When I walk in the memory lane.....
there are places where I wish to live again...

But when the pain and sorrow I see...
I wish nothing but just to flee...

aapkee shairee say to for sure no comparison!​
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aisi koi baat nahi hoti.......
u ur self write sooo gud.....and in english that like even more harder......
main ne english main likna shuru kr diya na......tou the world will go upside down
what gives u the inspiration....??
 
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Midnight dream said:
aisi koi baat nahi hoti.......
u ur self write sooo gud.....and in english that like even more harder......
main ne english main likna shuru kr diya na......tou the world will go upside down
what gives u the inspiration....??
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I write good English? ,_, People my age write wayy better than this....my vocab stinks BUT I'm a dheet person so I just continue and hopefully will get better..
In Sha Allah!
haha ...Nahi shuroo karoo! I'm sure it'll be as good as you write in Urdu :D I've written more in English but honestly made me feel so great when I wrote in Urdu :') I'm sure you''ll enjoy writing in English
Ahh....hmmm... I dont know....just my thoughts I guess....What about you? :)
 
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I write good English? ,_, People my age write wayy better than this....my vocab stinks BUT I'm a dheet person so I just continue and hopefully will get better..
In Sha Allah!
haha ...Nahi shuroo karoo! I'm sure it'll be as good as you write in Urdu :D I've written more in English but honestly made me feel so great when I wrote in Urdu :') I'm sure you''ll enjoy writing in English
Ahh....hmmm... I dont know....just my thoughts I guess....What about you? :)
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Thanks for the encouragement but i'll pass....English main likne ka maza nahi ata..:p
Urdu mai bhi like hai??? Share nahi karo ge...plzzz :giggle::giggle:
agar main ne apni Shayari ki dastaan shuru kr di na tou sara din lag jayee ga....but to sum it up...mera halat ne mujhay sikha diya:sick::oops:
 
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Thanks for the encouragement but i'll pass....English main likne ka maza nahi ata..:p
Urdu mai bhi like hai??? Share nahi karo ge...plzzz :giggle::giggle:
agar main ne apni Shayari ki dastaan shuru kr di na tou sara din lag jayee ga....but to sum it up...mera halat ne mujhay sikha diya:sick::oops:
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Welcome ^-^ Hahah I guess that's just your opinion.
Haan... Urdu poetry pasand hai! though I mostly read what teens have written. :') Jee karongee In Sha Allah.
That's good and bad at the same time. ,_,
 
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I write good English? ,_, People my age write wayy better than this....my vocab stinks BUT I'm a dheet person so I just continue and hopefully will get better..
In Sha Allah!
haha ...Nahi shuroo karoo! I'm sure it'll be as good as you write in Urdu :D I've written more in English but honestly made me feel so great when I wrote in Urdu :') I'm sure you''ll enjoy writing in English
Ahh....hmmm... I dont know....just my thoughts I guess....What about you? :)
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Stinks :LOL:

What, stinks, huh? My foot, Mun >_<
You're awesome >_>
 
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Coffee and Cigarettes

Her coffee is getting cold as she waits for him;
Little does she know that he doesn’t care.

He’s a monster; emotionless and hollow,
But the instincts of love she has to follow.

She stares out the window; looking for him,
Glazing through the glass she realizes there is no sign of him.

He’s a demon; devoid of any feeling,
Oh, this heartache, maybe she is dreaming.

The cold night wind blows down and up,
She can only hope that he shows up.

He’s the darkness; who never lets light through,
She is the light, oh, only if he knew.

She checks her phone; no message,
Maybe this situation is a blessing.

Why hasn’t he texted yet?
He doesn’t care, I bet.

Tears trickle down her cheek;
out the window she takes another peek.

He’s the rain; only shows up when he wants to,
Now she has no idea what she should do.

She picks up the phone to call him;
But she can’t get herself to do it.

Her coffee is getting cold as she waits for him…
If only she knew that he doesn’t care.

…

Waiting for her call; he does care!
But his emotions he doesn’t share.

He lights up a cigarette, slowly,
To get him through this melancholy.

Alone; always and forever,
‘I Love you’ is what she said never.

It is too much, the pain must end;
His shadow is his only friend.

She doesn’t care, she doesn’t love,
How can she be so heartless?

He picks up a gun and points it at his head,
Boom! He fell down and bled.

…

She finally decided to call him,
This was based on a whim.

Ring… Ring… He doesn’t pick up the phone,
Despair filled her as she started to moan.

She knew it was time to give up,
As she threw away her coffee cup.

Oh, the tragedy of love is strange;
Sometimes it just makes you insane.

THE END!

Date written: 14th April 2015​
 
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Coffee and Cigarettes

Her coffee is getting cold as she waits for him;
Little does she know that he doesn’t care.

He’s a monster; emotionless and hollow,
But the instincts of love she has to follow.

She stares out the window; looking for him,
Glazing through the glass she realizes there is no sign of him.

He’s a demon; devoid of any feeling,
Oh, this heartache, maybe she is dreaming.

The cold night wind blows down and up,
She can only hope that he shows up.

He’s the darkness; who never lets light through,
She is the light, oh, only if he knew.

She checks her phone; no message,
Maybe this situation is a blessing.

Why hasn’t he texted yet?
He doesn’t care, I bet.

Tears trickle down her cheek;
out the window she takes another peek.

He’s the rain; only shows up when he wants to,
Now she has no idea what she should do.

She picks up the phone to call him;
But she can’t get herself to do it.

Her coffee is getting cold as she waits for him…
If only she knew that he doesn’t care.

…

Waiting for her call; he does care!
But his emotions he doesn’t share.

He lights up a cigarette, slowly,
To get him through this melancholy.

Alone; always and forever,
‘I Love you’ is what she said never.

It is too much, the pain must end;
His shadow is his only friend.

She doesn’t care, she doesn’t love,
How can she be so heartless?

He picks up a gun and points it at his head,
Boom! He fell down and bled.

…

She finally decided to call him,
This was based on a whim.

Ring… Ring… He doesn’t pick up the phone,
Despair filled her as she started to moan.

She knew it was time to give up,
As she threw her coffee cup.

Oh, the tragedy of love is strange;
Sometimes it just makes you insane.

THE END!

Date written: 14th April 2015​
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that was Awesome.......have to say there is no one who can compete with u..... if i had the chance i could like it a thousand times :p
 
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Coffee and Cigarettes

Her coffee is getting cold as she waits for him;
Little does she know that he doesn’t care.

He’s a monster; emotionless and hollow,
But the instincts of love she has to follow.

She stares out the window; looking for him,
Glazing through the glass she realizes there is no sign of him.

He’s a demon; devoid of any feeling,
Oh, this heartache, maybe she is dreaming.

The cold night wind blows down and up,
She can only hope that he shows up.

He’s the darkness; who never lets light through,
She is the light, oh, only if he knew.

She checks her phone; no message,
Maybe this situation is a blessing.

Why hasn’t he texted yet?
He doesn’t care, I bet.

Tears trickle down her cheek;
out the window she takes another peek.

He’s the rain; only shows up when he wants to,
Now she has no idea what she should do.

She picks up the phone to call him;
But she can’t get herself to do it.

Her coffee is getting cold as she waits for him…
If only she knew that he doesn’t care.

…

Waiting for her call; he does care!
But his emotions he doesn’t share.

He lights up a cigarette, slowly,
To get him through this melancholy.

Alone; always and forever,
‘I Love you’ is what she said never.

It is too much, the pain must end;
His shadow is his only friend.

She doesn’t care, she doesn’t love,
How can she be so heartless?

He picks up a gun and points it at his head,
Boom! He fell down and bled.

…

She finally decided to call him,
This was based on a whim.

Ring… Ring… He doesn’t pick up the phone,
Despair filled her as she started to moan.

She knew it was time to give up,
As she threw away her coffee cup.

Oh, the tragedy of love is strange;
Sometimes it just makes you insane.

THE END!

Date written: 14th April 2015​
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Haaww :'(
The title made me feel it'd be funny...ahh..well surprise. :p
 
Phoenix Blood

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Dark Destination said:
Coffee and Cigarettes

Her coffee is getting cold as she waits for him;
Little does she know that he doesn’t care.

He’s a monster; emotionless and hollow,
But the instincts of love she has to follow.

She stares out the window; looking for him,
Glazing through the glass she realizes there is no sign of him.

He’s a demon; devoid of any feeling,
Oh, this heartache, maybe she is dreaming.

The cold night wind blows down and up,
She can only hope that he shows up.

He’s the darkness; who never lets light through,
She is the light, oh, only if he knew.

She checks her phone; no message,
Maybe this situation is a blessing.

Why hasn’t he texted yet?
He doesn’t care, I bet.

Tears trickle down her cheek;
out the window she takes another peek.

He’s the rain; only shows up when he wants to,
Now she has no idea what she should do.

She picks up the phone to call him;
But she can’t get herself to do it.

Her coffee is getting cold as she waits for him…
If only she knew that he doesn’t care.

…

Waiting for her call; he does care!
But his emotions he doesn’t share.

He lights up a cigarette, slowly,
To get him through this melancholy.

Alone; always and forever,
‘I Love you’ is what she said never.

It is too much, the pain must end;
His shadow is his only friend.

She doesn’t care, she doesn’t love,
How can she be so heartless?

He picks up a gun and points it at his head,
Boom! He fell down and bled.

…

She finally decided to call him,
This was based on a whim.

Ring… Ring… He doesn’t pick up the phone,
Despair filled her as she started to moan.

She knew it was time to give up,
As she threw away her coffee cup.

Oh, the tragedy of love is strange;
Sometimes it just makes you insane.

THE END!

Date written: 14th April 2015​
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*cough* :p
 
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