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Poetry! =P

Midnight dream

Midnight dream

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MAA.


Is zulm ki duniya main faqat pyar hai
Hai meray liye saya,dewar meri maa,

Andheri raton main woh thamay mera hath
Aise hamra-e-safr hai meri maa,

Ghumrahh jo ho jaon is duniya main
Qandeel ki manind shamaa' ban jati hai meri maa,

Khafa ki umeed na thi mujhay doston se
Wafa tou sirf dekhati hai meri maa,

Ek ghalti se dost bhi ban jata hai dushmann
Hazaron ghaltion ke bawajood na rothti hai meri maa,

Mashoor kare apni shereen beyani se sab ko woh
Aisi pakiza ikhlaq ki malik hai meri maa,

Tamam ka tamam chehra,Noor main ghota-e-zun us ka
Rask-e-phool,rask-e-chand,rashk-e-pari hai meri maa,

Science ne tou keh di basirat ki wohohat
Meri ankhon ka noor hai meri maa,

Sakoon-e-ankh subh ki shabnam main kahan?
Meri ankhoon ki thandak hai meri maa,

Taloo-e-khursheed se hoti hai agaz-e-subh
Meri zindagi ki subh ka agaz hai meri maa,

Written by Myself on 26 July,2012
Dedicated to My mother on her Birthday, which is on 27 July:)
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My Name Well this is it.:) Hope you enjoy reading it..I already told you keh this is not so gud but I am proud of this, since this is the only nazm I wrote till now and Of course bcoz i dedicated it to my mother.:p
 
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Midnight dream said:
MAA.


Is zulm ki duniya main faqat pyar hai
Hai meray liye saya,dewar meri maa,

Andheri raton main woh thamay mera hath
Aise hamra-e-safr hai meri maa,

Ghumrahh jo ho jaon is duniya main
Qandeel ki manind shamaa' ban jati hai meri maa,

Khafa ki umeed na thi mujhay doston se
Wafa tou sirf dekhati hai meri maa,

Ek ghalti se dost bhi ban jata hai dushmann
Hazaron ghaltion ke bawajood na rothti hai meri maa,

Mashoor kare apni shereen beyani se sab ko woh
Aisi pakiza ikhlaq ki malik hai meri maa,

Tamam ka tamam chehra,Noor main ghota-e-zun us ka
Rask-e-phool,rask-e-chand,rashk-e-pari hai meri maa,

Science ne tou keh di basirat ki wohohat
Meri ankhon ka noor hai meri maa,

Sakoon-e-ankh subh ki shabnam main kahan?
Meri ankhoon ki thandak hai meri maa,

Taloo-e-khursheed se hoti hai agaz-e-subh
Meri zindagi ki subh ka agaz hai meri maa,

Written by Myself on 26 July,2012
Dedicated to My mother on her Birthday, which is on 27 July:)
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My Name Well this is it.:) Hope you enjoy reading it..I already told you keh this is not so gud but I am proud of this, since this is the only nazm I wrote till now and Of course bcoz i dedicated it to my mother.:p
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You are so right this is NOT good ,_, its AHMAZING!
MashaAllah you write very well and this was very sweet and thoughtful!
 
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My Name said:
You are so right this is NOT good ,_, its AHMAZING!
MashaAllah you write very well and this was very sweet and thoughtful!
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LOL..thanku ..magar app ne sach main enjoy kiya.?
btw app ko bataon..jo last 2 shair hain na...woh main ne subah Fajr ke waqt likhi thi...meray samne Suraj tuloo ho raha tha..aur meray zehan main meri ammi jaan aa gae.
 
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Midnight dream said:
LOL..thanku ..magar app ne sach main enjoy kiya.?
btw app ko bataon..jo last 2 shair hain na...woh main ne subah Fajr ke waqt likhi thi...meray samne Suraj tuloo ho raha tha..aur meray zehan main meri ammi jaan aa gae.
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From that capital "M" in the title till that "," in the end I loved every bit of it!
Awh :') wow kia manzar thaa,aur kia shair nikla ^-^
 
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Pain of this world you human have not seen
In times rough and tough you have not yet been


You've had the time to take rest and dream
But has not the time come for you to awaken and come clean


Seal those lips of yours that you use pointlessly
Open wide those eyes and use them wisely


Let your mind be awake and let your heart be strong
To hear what is right and what is wrong

Though it boggles the mind to hear stories untold
Fear may surround you but to courage you must keep hold
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(Written by Me on 15/5/2015)
 
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My Name said:
Pain of this world you human have not seen
In times rough and tough you have not yet been


You've had the time to take rest and dream
But has not the time come for you to awaken and come clean


Seal those lips of yours that you use pointlessly
Open wide those eyes and use them wisely


Let your mind be awake and let your heart be strong
To hear what is right and what is wrong

Though it boggles the mind to hear stories untold
Fear may surround you but to courage you must keep hold
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(Written by Me on 15/5/2015)
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*sigh* U render me speechles sista..My sweet shayari wali behan..:p
 
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My Name said:
Pain of this world you human have not seen
In times rough and tough you have not yet been


You've had the time to take rest and dream
But has not the time come for you to awaken and come clean


Seal those lips of yours that you use pointlessly
Open wide those eyes and use them wisely


Let your mind be awake and let your heart be strong
To hear what is right and what is wrong

Though it boggles the mind to hear stories untold
Fear may surround you but to courage you must keep hold
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(Written by Me on 15/5/2015)
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Amesome.. (y)
 
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Midnight dream said:
*sigh* U render me speechles sista..My sweet shayari wali behan..:p
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Ahaha thank you yar:rolleyes:but this seriously is nothing compared to your poem for your mother!MashaAllah!
When you write more,don't forget to share I'll be waiting Shaira.;)
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Amesome.. (y)
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Thanks:D
Did you write anything recently? If yes then do post ,your poems are great.(y)MashaAllah!

Any ideas for the title?
 
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My Name said:
Thanks:D
Did you write anything recently? If yes then do post ,your poems are great.(y)MashaAllah!

Any ideas for the title?
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No problem. ^

I wrote one or two poems - will post them soon. x)

And uhmm, the title..
Well, In your poem you are talking to humans.. and telling them what to do, and what not to do in life.
So maybe pick a title that is relevant to that.. or just give it the title 'Life', though that's a simple title..
 
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Dark Destination said:
No problem. ^

I wrote one or two poems - will post them soon. x)

And uhmm, the title..
Well, In your poem you are talking to humans.. and telling them what to do, and what not to do in life.
So maybe pick a title that is relevant to that.. or just give it the title 'Life', though that's a simple title..
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Alright :)
Yeah you are right...Life does seems simple :') I thought of You yet know nothing...but that I don't know if it really fits nicely?
 
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My Name said:
Pain of this world you human have not seen
In times rough and tough you have not yet been


You've had the time to take rest and dream
But has not the time come for you to awaken and come clean


Seal those lips of yours that you use pointlessly
Open wide those eyes and use them wisely


Let your mind be awake and let your heart be strong
To hear what is right and what is wrong

Though it boggles the mind to hear stories untold
Fear may surround you but to courage you must keep hold
​


(Written by Me on 15/5/2015)
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WOW WOW MASHA ALLAH YAAR (y)(y) AWESOME !!!!! :D as always :D
 
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