Poetry! =P

[My Name]

Defy the odds

Abandoned i stood, grief my only companion
Darkness enveloped me, light my only hope
Concealing my anguish, I smiled without emotion
Though lament, i mingled without passion

A masked face, hiding its feels
A lifeless man, robbed of his existence
Sparkling eyes, holding their wail
Mysterious aura, brought no avail.

Heart ripped n ashed, eyes devoid of sight
Solitary on the battlefield, inert in the cold night
Death laughed, my enemies rejoiced
My blood became stale, my tears dry.

Longing to define myself once more,
Craving for happiness that would once again grow.
Around me lingered the breath that blew my dreams,
Scars that spoke bravery, bid farewell to my soul.

I closed my eyes and breathed again,
I have to dream once more, gotta kill the pain.
Defeat I shall never accept,
A battle I once fought, a battle I swear to win again.

Now, a warrior I stand, victory my companion,
The stars embody me, each ray of light my sweet hope,
My eyes twinkle, I stand against the wind.
The game is on, the battle is forever mine.

- Combined effort of Iris Dylan Lane nd Wkhan860

I see the title has been added.Awesome!

I really think this was very brilliantly written.
The way the thoughts have been neatly assembled.Great.
The descriptive words in each word,deserve equal spot light.
The story line is just terrific,specially because it displays might and obviously defying all odds.
Keep it up!
If some one calls you Poet,Khan or Poetess,IDL.Accept the title. K?

 

[Wkhan860]

I see the title has been added.Awesome!

I really think this was very brilliantly written.
The way the thoughts have been neatly assembled.Great.
The descriptive words in each word,deserve equal spot light.
The story line is just terrific,specially because it displays might and obviously defying all odds.
Keep it up!
If some one calls you Poet,Khan or Poetess,IDL.Accept the title. K?

I knew you would point out that

Thank you but i believe that Iris deserves all the praise. The story she tries to project in the second half is classically developed.
Hahaha....I think its to early for that.

 

[My Name]

I knew you would point out that

Thank you but i believe that Iris deserves all the praise. The story she tries to project in the second half is classically developed.
Hahaha....I think its to early for that.

I'ts good I did. It's powerful!

Welcome.But this was great.
Iris Dylan Lane

 

[My Name]

He started it I wouldn't have written something like tht. xD



I don't omG why such big words? Classically developed? Astaghfar -_______-
Tht i agree too...your grammar is so damn rusty

Damn gtg..i had to say that before leaving xD

Haha it's nice.
You should write.

 

[Wkhan860]

Log kanton se Bach ke chaltay hain ,humne pholon say zakham khaye hai ...
Tum toh ghairoon ki baat kartey ho,humne to apne bhi Azmaye hai

 

[Midnight dream]

Log kanton se Bach ke chaltay hain ,humne pholon say zakham khaye hai ...
Tum toh ghairoon ki baat kartey ho,humne to apne bhi Azmaye hai

Woh ajnabi hai kab dil tor day, hawa ka kya pata kab rukh mor dey
Hum tou jeetay hain logon ko khush karne ke liye,
dosre ka kya pata kab yun chor day.

Lol bhool gaya shair. :/ But this shoar reminded me .
I love this.<3 the ones who seems the most faithful hurt the most .

 

[Wkhan860]

Woh ajnabi hai kab dil tor day, hawa ka kya pata kab rukh mor dey
Hum tou jeetay hain logon ko khush karne ke liye,
dosre ka kya pata kab yun chor day.

Lol bhool gaya shair. :/ But this shoar reminded me .
I love this.<3 the ones who seems the most faithful hurt the most .

Nice.

Yeah i know. People are so pathetic.

 

[Midnight dream]

Nice.

Yeah i know. People are so pathetic.

*sigh* Couldnt agree with you anymore on this.

 

[Wkhan860]

hosh waloo ko khabar kya....bekhudi kya cheez hai
ishk kijiye..pher samjhye....zindagi kya cheez hai

 

[sj0007]

Defy the odds

Abandoned i stood, grief my only companion
Darkness enveloped me, light my only hope
Concealing my anguish, I smiled without emotion
Though lament, i mingled without passion

A masked face, hiding its feels
A lifeless man, robbed of his existence
Sparkling eyes, holding their wail
Mysterious aura, brought no avail.

Heart ripped n ashed, eyes devoid of sight
Solitary on the battlefield, inert in the cold night
Death laughed, my enemies rejoiced
My blood became stale, my tears dry.

Longing to define myself once more,
Craving for happiness that would once again grow.
Around me lingered the breath that blew my dreams,
Scars that spoke bravery, bid farewell to my soul.

I closed my eyes and breathed again,
I have to dream once more, gotta kill the pain.
Defeat I shall never accept,
A battle I once fought, a battle I swear to win again.

Now, a warrior I stand, victory my companion,
The stars embody me, each ray of light my sweet hope,
My eyes twinkle, I stand against the wind.
The game is on, the battle is forever mine.

- Combined effort of Iris Dylan Lane nd Wkhan860

Wowwwww, its amazing!

 

[sj0007]

My Name ur sharings and ur poetry is just ❤❤❤❤

 

[My Name]

My Name ur sharings and ur poetry is just ❤❤❤❤

Thank you so much!
I really treasure all your words of appreciation! <3

 

[sj0007]

Thank you so much!
I really treasure all your words of appreciation! <3

Awwww........ It's good to know that they r that important to u......... ❤

 

[My Name]

Awwww........ I am glad they r that important to u......... ❤

They are always. <3

 

[sj0007]

They are always. <3

❤❤❤
That 'always' reminded me of harry potter >.<

 

[My Name]

❤❤❤
That 'always' reminded me of harry potter >.<

haha hmm I don't knwo much of HP. XD

 

[sj0007]

haha hmm I don't knwo much of HP. XD

Haha....... But I highly recommend it to u....... They r just amazinnnngggggg! ❤

 

[My Name]

Haha....... But I highly recommend it to u....... They r just amazinnnngggggg! ❤

If I tell you how I've seen/read HP you might think of committing suicide.XD

 

[sj0007]

If I tell you how I've seen/read HP you might think of committing suicide.XD

Ahem ahem what u mean????
Elaboration needed.

 

[My Name]

Ahem ahem what u mean????

Ahem I will tell you later.
How much and how I've read/seen HP.