Poetry! =P

[GetSomeLife]

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What the journey was for me​

You gave me the biggest gift that anyone can -​

You gave me so many memories to remember and​

You helped me walk through the blizzard of life​

Your words hugging me, your smiles holding me​

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Can't forget the cheery afternoons we had,​

Laughing at nonsense and fooling around​

The thoughts keep ringing of the nights i'm glad​

When I was up till two, those memories- profound​

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You made me who i was, I don't know who i am​

My sorrows you held back, you were the dam​

I had the unburnt candles, you lit the flame​

You had the perfect picture, I was the just the frame​

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You left a mark on my life that will never fade,​

A flashback of you, whenever my memories i raid,​

Thought me what life is all about, how to live and smile​

These lessons I know but its hard all the while​

To do the excersices without my teacher at hand....​

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[étudiante]

seems like your tutor??

as far as life's lessons are concerned... YES

 

[étudiante]

u liking poetry?

 

[GetSomeLife]

u liking poetry?

Well, it is good plus it reminds me of something

 

[étudiante]

Well, it is good plus it reminds me of something

why THANK YOU Sir :,)
reminds?

 

[Spidey21]

as far as life's lessons are concerned... YES

when it comes to life i love the verse of the song Now I know why you wana hate me (MI2 OST) by limp Bizkit..

"Lifes a lesson....you learn it when your through..."

check out the song...though its metal but its really nice this way!!

Well, it is good plus it reminds me of something

Something or Someone???

 

[étudiante]

when it comes to life i love the verse of the song Now I know why you wana hate me (MI2 OST) by limp Bizkit..

"Lifes a lesson....you learn it when your through..."

check out the song...though its metal but its really nice this way!!



Something or Someone???

sure i will its true dat line

 

[Spidey21]

sure i will its true dat line

yeah i know..

sad but true..

 

[Epiphany]

What the journey was for me​

You gave me the biggest gift that anyone can -​

You gave me so many memories to remember and​

You helped me walk through the blizzard of life​

Your words hugging me, your smiles holding me​

​

Can't forget the cheery afternoons we had,​

Laughing at nonsense and fooling around​

The thoughts keep ringing of the nights i'm glad​

When I was up till two, those memories- profound​

​

You made me who i was, I don't know who i am​

My sorrows you held back, you were the dam​

I had the unburnt candles, you lit the flame​

You had the perfect picture, I was the just the frame​

​

You left a mark on my life that will never fade,​

A flashback of you, whenever my memories i raid,​

Thought me what life is all about, how to live and smile​

These lessons I know but its hard all the while​

To do the excersices without my teacher at hand....​

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Did Oscar bite you? AMAZING. <3

 

[étudiante]

Did Oscar bite you? AMAZING. <3

hahahahhahaha! nopes! he doesn't bite
THANK YOU :,) i srsly dint expect ne1 to like dis... but m so glad u ppl did :,)

 

[Epiphany]

hahahahhahaha! nopes! he doesn't bite
THANK YOU :,) i srsly dint expect ne1 to like dis... but m so glad u ppl did :,)

I don't like it. I LOVE IT. How can one not like such amazing piece of writing. Kidding me?

 

[SalmanPakRocks]

What the journey was for me​

You gave me the biggest gift that anyone can -​

You gave me so many memories to remember and​

You helped me walk through the blizzard of life​

Your words hugging me, your smiles holding me​

​

Can't forget the cheery afternoons we had,​

Laughing at nonsense and fooling around​

The thoughts keep ringing of the nights i'm glad​

When I was up till two, those memories- profound​

​

You made me who i was, I don't know who i am​

My sorrows you held back, you were the dam​

I had the unburnt candles, you lit the flame​

You had the perfect picture, I was the just the frame​

​

You left a mark on my life that will never fade,​

A flashback of you, whenever my memories i raid,​

Thought me what life is all about, how to live and smile​

These lessons I know but its hard all the while​

To do the excersices without my teacher at hand....​

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AWESOME but wouldn't it be better if you write
You made me who i was, I don't know who i am "now" with it too? Just a suggestion

 

[étudiante]

I think I posted this earlier. Don't want to search for it so please, ignore if already read previously.
- ME.

i dont think so memories... :,)

 

[étudiante]

AWESOME but wouldn't it be better if you write
You made me who i was, I don't know who i am "now" with it too? Just a suggestion

thanks
true ^_^ i guess i missed it its supposed to be dere... i'll change it thanx!

 

[Epiphany]

i dont think so memories... :,)

Yeah, maybe I didn't. Your poem forced me to post this one up.

 

[étudiante]

I don't like it. I LOVE IT. How can one not like such amazing piece of writing. Kidding me?

awwwhhh! thank you! dis poem means a LOT to me... n m SO glad oders lyk it as well...

 

[étudiante]

Yeah, maybe I didn't. Your poem forced me to post this one up.

u recount urs, i'll recount mine

 

[Epiphany]

awwwhhh! thank you! dis poem means a LOT to me... n m SO glad oders lyk it as well...

Can I report that poem of yours for being extremely awesome and unfathomably inspirational?

 

[Epiphany]

u recount urs, i'll recount mine

I don't have to.

 

[étudiante]

Can I report that poem for being extremely awesome and unfathomably inspirational?

its not DAT great den sum of urs n Salman's ought 2 be removed 2

@salman... i changed it thanks again