Poetry! =P

[sweetiepie]

I’m Proud To Be A Pakistani
Where At Least I Know
I’m Free
&
Won’t Forget The Men
Who Died,
Who Gave That Right To Me
Protect Ur Country Ppl !
Stand Up Against The Haters Of Pak !
Proud As I Ever Could Be 2 Be A Paki !

 

[Epiphany]

"Never did I know such a phase will come.
When all there will be misery to the life.
When all hope will abandon.
When my hand will hold not your hand instead a knife."


Epiphany.

 

[étudiante]

"Never did I know such a phase will come.
When all there will be misery to the life.
When all hope will abandon.
When my hand will hold not your hand instead a knife."


Epiphany.

Kya huwaaa???

 

[Epiphany]

Kya huwaaa???

LOL. Kuch naeeee!

 

[étudiante]

SOME people just laaaaaavv giving me heart attacks (And there's TWO of em )

 

[Science lover]

Poems! ahh.. no one can actually describe it! But can only feel it!
I dont know how to write a poem but now that someone has questioned me..so i will try!


Some love some hate
some try some fly
some fail some die
some eat some shit
Some day we rise the other we fall
Only thing we do is some
and thats AWE-some

 

[badrobot14]

"Never did I know such a phase will come.
When all there will be misery to the life.
When all hope will abandon.
When my hand will hold not your hand instead a knife."


Epiphany.

lol... seriously.. how do you write such stuff...?? I mean its touchy but why wd some1 wanna write about suicide..???

 

[Raheel Ahmed Siddiqui]

SOME people just laaaaaavv giving me heart attacks (And there's TWO of em )

Abi tum tifl-e-maqtab ho sambhalo apny joban ko
Ye totay kachi fasloon ka bara nuqsaan karty hain

 

[Raheel Ahmed Siddiqui]

you people have bad choices or you dont have this thing "ZOQ". Come on show some thing

 

[areeba fatima]

Sab Khasaaro'n ko Jama kar kay ye Haasil niklaa.....
Dil-e-Nadaa'n ki koi baat na maanii Jaayee......!!!

 

[Epiphany]

lol... seriously.. how do you write such stuff...?? I mean its touchy but why wd some1 wanna write about suicide..???

It comes out natural I guess. It's depressing I know, just couldn't help it.

I write "pleasant" stuff too ;

"These tears freeze in mid-air,
light surrounds.
Fills them up with 'hope'.
They don't fall."

"And now I need your hand.
Cause I know you know.
I've always loved you,
more than just a friend."

 

[étudiante]

It comes out natural I guess. It's depressing I know, just couldn't help it.

I write "pleasant" stuff too ;

"And now I need your hand.
Cause I know you know.
I've always loved you,
more than just a friend."

It's BUT It's not pleasant. It makes me cry

 

[Epiphany]

It's BUT It's not pleasant. It makes me cry

LOL. Why cry?

 

[étudiante]

LOL. Why cry?

Because it's so saweetto *_*

 

[Epiphany]

Because it's so saweetto *_*

Es cierto, así

 

[sweetiepie]

~MUJHAY TUM YAAD AATE HO~

Khayalon main,

Sawalon main,

Mohabbat k hawalon main,

Tumhain aawaz deta hoon,

Tumain wapas bulata hoon,

Jab koi nazam kehta hoon,

Usay unwan deta hoon,

“MUJHAY TUM YAAD AATAE HO”

Tumari yad holay sy koi sarghoshi karti hy,

Palkain bheeg jati hain,

Do aansoo toot girtay hain,

Main aankhon ko jhukata hoon,

Baazahir muskurata hoon,

Faqat itna he kehta hoon,

Mujhay kitna satate ho,

“MUJHAY TUM YAAD AATE HO”

“BOHT AYAD AATE HO’....

 

[sweetiepie]

Ek tamanna si hai iss maayoos dil ki kash…!!
Aaj aansoo ke sath har khwaab bhi beh jaye…...!!!

 

[sweetiepie]

The happiest moment ever when you feel the courage to let go of what you can't change. ♥

 

[étudiante]

Es cierto, así

Oui Monsiuer :'D

 

[badrobot14]

It comes out natural I guess. It's depressing I know, just couldn't help it.

I write "pleasant" stuff too ;

"These tears freeze in mid-air,
light surrounds.
Fills them up with 'hope'.
They don't fall."

"And now I need your hand.
Cause I know you know.
I've always loved you,
more than just a friend."

now that's much better.. since its not suicidal..

but why is ur poetry tangled in love... coz you know whn writers write about love its 99% of the time love of someone who is not their mahram.... and what that does is, it stirs up feelings... and can lead to impermissible things.. as words can be so sugar-coated... and most ppl can't see through them... (Alhamdulillah, I judge based on actions not words. )

Like a crazy example would be IF there is certain someone I like at uni... now I text her your poems she'd b day dreaming abt me.... next I can slowly go out with her... she'd be 'in love' right....? Then when I'd have enough of her I can dump her.... and move on.. (am I not pathetic...? A'uzubillah... Alhamdulillah I stay away from such stuff so my life is simple)

that's why it is no surprize that:

The ruling on poetry is the same as the ruling on speech or words, of which it is a part. The well known, general principle is that which is narrated in Mursal ‘Urwah ibn al-Zubayr: “Poetry is like speech: what is good is good, and what is bad is bad.”

If the poetry involves words of love to a specific woman who is not permissible for the poet, or encourages sin, then it is haraam poetry.

http://islamqa.info/en/ref/146652

an example of GOOD poetry.. that I really like is of the urdu poet Iqbal.. I mean that guy is a genius... his poems for kids r like "lab pe aati hai dua" which is great but the deep ones are so cool... like his poem 'shikwa' and 'jawab-e-shikwa'.. I mean that is poetry that rejuvenates a nation.... beat that.