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YE BHI ACHA HUA K USY PA NA SAKY HUM SAQI
HUMARA HO K AGAR BICHARTA TO QYAMAT HOTI
HUMARA HO K AGAR BICHARTA TO QYAMAT HOTI
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so now comes the turn of my IMMATURE poetry
aankhon kay agay ik andhaira sa chha raha hai
jantay ho kyun? mujh ko parhna par raha hai
ab tum hi batao, me kiya karun?
sab soye huway hen, tang kisaykarun?
likh me nazam raha hun samnay kitaab hai pari
kash zehn-nashini k liye jadu ki koi chhari
na koi kaam na kaaj is umer may
raat ko jaagun ga, so jaun ga sehr may
lambi chhutiyon ka ab sitam to jhail lun
sochta hun school ja kay kuchh khail lun
kiya likh raha hun me, is ka koi fayeda nahi
kiya is dunya may, meri pasand ka koi qayeda nahi?
magar kisi ko kiya pata me kiya likh raha hun
hath may hai kitab, per shararatain me ker raha hun
ye raaz faash na karna tujhay batla dun me ya
phir me jaanay kyun nazm likh raha hun ye?
(ME)
xD thanka yewwwwwamazing man
MASHALLAH, ap ko aj ke bad me 'Iqbal' refer karon ga
the maza in reading it and the true expression of one's thoughtsxD thanka yewwwww
haha, is may *iqbal* wali kon si sift thi?![]()
owh! :Othe maza in reading it and the true expression of one's thoughts
well i like it cuz of its comical approachowh! :O
i seriously cant believe my very first poem is being liked![]()
>.>well i like it cuz of its comical approach
ap hi bar bar uski explanation poochraha hai aur pir kerre hai kia itni tareef teek nai>.>
<.<
bas ker do itni tareef sehat k liye achhi nahi hoti.
-.- go die!ap hi bar bar uski explanation poochraha hai aur pir kerre hai kia itni tareef teek nai
i take all my words back and instead
enna tu 'wadda' shair![]()
meri poetry ko kuchh nahi kehna! ._.enni bori badwa![]()
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