Poetry! =P

[22shimmer22girly]

when something expected for long went against all my hopes,
"Expectation is the root of all heartache"

Clouds of my hope have faded
Shadow of intense gloom has shaded
my heart, giving some senseless feelings
like the shattering of some glass ceilings
But I agree and won’t say its unfair
..coz it is Almighty Allah’s affair
bear the deadly aches, throw tears away
Its life’s part to get hurdles in every way
with no concept of failure or pain
it wouldn’t have been a pleasure to gain
life were like a bucket, with fruitless efforts,
valueless treasures and pleasure-less comforts
aftermaths of success are so enjoyable
only because you made your aches bearable,
those aches of losing a golden chance
which blur the vision and not let us glance;
as the droplets flowed off the tears’ ocean
depressing the mind, halting all the motion
Some soft tears, in hard-times get suppress
are the ones to congratulate on our success
Like the fact of life that no man denies
That everything once lives and then dies

WOW I LOVE UR WRITING !!!! UNIQUE BUT YET BEAUTIFUL!!

 

[SadiaMaryam]

WOW I LOVE UR WRITING !!!! UNIQUE BUT YET BEAUTIFUL!!

thank you

 

[Iris Dylan Lane]

“For grace and mercy- be like the sun.
For covering others’ faults- be like the night .
For generosity- be like the running water
For rage and anger- be like death.
For modesty- be like the earth.
Appear as you are. Be as you appear.”
—Rumi

 

[Iris Dylan Lane]

"Ultimate Truth

Yesterday has gone with the wind,
Today is kissing my mortal eyes,
Tomorrow is knocking at my door,
May be the day after tomorrow , i would be no more.
I was alone before, i am alone today and i would be alone thereafter.."

 

[My Name]

“For grace and mercy- be like the sun.
For covering others’ faults- be like the night .
For generosity- be like the running water
For rage and anger- be like death.
For modesty- be like the earth.
Appear as you are. Be as you appear.”
—Rumi

Rumis quotes are also ahmazing!

"Ultimate Truth

Yesterday has gone with the wind,
Today is kissing my mortal eyes,
Tomorrow is knocking at my door,
May be the day after tomorrow , i would be no more.
I was alone before, i am alone today and i would be alone thereafter.."

Jazakillah khari for this.You wrote?

 

[Iris Dylan Lane]

Rumis quotes are also ahmazing!

Jazakillah khari for this.You wrote?

Yes i know.
No i didn't..hence the quotation marks

 

[My Name]

Yes i know.
No i didn't..hence the quotation marks

Oopsie didn't notice. XD

 

[SadiaMaryam]

AWWW thank uuuu XD

now u would be cocksure I'm insane and my insanity is at its peak

 

[SadiaMaryam]

no sweeto u havent seen my story yet...hold ur horses honey.....XD im way more insane than ya XP....i have not only an A* or distinction in Craziness but im a phd holder XD

..then I'm a double doctor in Insanity..

 

[Wkhan860]

Lost Innocence

Wind whistling,
Snow glistening,
We try not to,
But we're all listening.

Loud screams,
Bad dreams,
It's very far,
But close it seems.

Sad day,
Lost our way,
All we can do,
Is simply pray.

Innocence gone,
Life no longer long,
We may not know,
But we're all doing wrong.

Joy lost,
The Holocaust,
We look to see,
Hearts covered in frost.

Wars fought,
Sins taught,
Making mistakes,
Hoping not to be caught.

Not taking blame,
Pushing for fame,
As advanced as we are,
We're still all untamed.

Too much pride,
Needing a guide,
We will deny it,
But behind lies we hide.

Hurting others,
Betraying brother,
Many forgetting,
To appreciate mothers.

Lies are fed,
Filling heart and head,
Through all of these years,
Innocent blood has been shed.

Children abandoned,
Lonely and stranded,
We're all wasting the life
That we have been handed.

Taking from the poor,
We're loving no more,
Fight to be free,
End up starting a war.

People starting fights,
No longer enjoying the sights,
While mere mortals are taking
Our God given rights.

Soldiers killed,
Void can't be filled,
Pay close attention,
For pure souls have been tilled.

Need to find peace,
Work together like geese,
But greatest of all,
The hate needs to cease.

 

[My Name]

Lost Innocence

Wind whistling,
Snow glistening,
We try not to,
But we're all listening.

Loud screams,
Bad dreams,
It's very far,
But close it seems.

Sad day,
Lost our way,
All we can do,
Is simply pray.

Innocence gone,
Life no longer long,
We may not know,
But we're all doing wrong.

Joy lost,
The Holocaust,
We look to see,
Hearts covered in frost.

Wars fought,
Sins taught,
Making mistakes,
Hoping not to be caught.

Not taking blame,
Pushing for fame,
As advanced as we are,
We're still all untamed.

Too much pride,
Needing a guide,
We will deny it,
But behind lies we hide.

Hurting others,
Betraying brother,
Many forgetting,
To appreciate mothers.

Lies are fed,
Filling heart and head,
Through all of these years,
Innocent blood has been shed.

Children abandoned,
Lonely and stranded,
We're all wasting the life
That we have been handed.

Taking from the poor,
We're loving no more,
Fight to be free,
End up starting a war.

People starting fights,
No longer enjoying the sights,
While mere mortals are taking
Our God given rights.

Soldiers killed,
Void can't be filled,
Pay close attention,
For pure souls have been tilled.

Need to find peace,
Work together like geese,
But greatest of all,
The hate needs to cease.

So true!

We're still all untamed.

 

[Wkhan860]

i know who she is....and i hope and pray that wherever she is....she feels what u feel isA

Excuse me?
Lol...u ddnt read the poem rgt? Its not a romantic poetry, it talk of bloodshed and wars waged by humans for their purposes.
Nd.....theres no she.

 

[My Name]

oh shoot....my bad.....i guess i read way to fast....XP
LOL MY BAD SORRYYYY
im dead right?! *oops*

You are not dead.
I as a poetry loving person suggest to read it all slowly word by word.The poem is very heavy and needs to be given much thought.
The poem is NOT entertaining.It is the truth,a way of presenting.The rhyme scheme is fun though. XD

 

[My Name]

my bad sorry

Haha XD

 

[My Name]

stop laughing lol XP im extremely embarrassed

You got me confused. XD
I guess you judged the poem by the title. Haha.

 

[mistique_bee]

You are not dead.
I as a poetry loving person suggest to read it all slowly word by word.The poem is very heavy and needs to be given much thought.
The poem is NOT entertaining.It is the truth,a way of presenting.The rhyme scheme is fun though. XD

MN...

 

[My Name]

MN...

Awh Ty ^-^

 

[mistique_bee]

Awh Ty ^-^

u r amazing..no doubt ^_^

 

[My Name]

u r amazing..no doubt ^_^

Thank you<3 You make me smile! ^.^
lekin..Ziada mazaq sayhat kai liye acha nahi hota. XD

 

[mistique_bee]

Thank you<3 You make me smile! ^.^
lekin..Ziada mazaq sayhat kai liye acha nahi hota. XD

hahah..n u made u smile..as u always do...
btw ur r amazhing cux u r my frnd ..now ths mazak...pehly wala nhi tha