Poetry! =P

[whitetiger64]

AMAZING!!!! n very touchy too :,(

thank u!!

 

[suvain]

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Dear Sister,​

I hope you are in all health and peace​

I have something to tell you, so listen up please​

Ever since I was young, and just past your knees​

You’d keep swatting me away, like a pack of flees​

You’d stare at me, as if I was some weird disease​

On your forehead, there’d be a permanent crease​

There was always something to tease​

Be it my nose, my ears or the way I sneeze​

And when I’d complain, you’d give me a squeeze​

Roll your eyes and say, ‘I was joking, jeez!’​

But I know it was more and always wanted to release​

You from this misery and put you at ease​

I decided I must let all this stop and freeze​

By having my entire existence abruptly cease​

Maybe now you can live happy and pleased……​

Love,​

Me​

"Words are like fire; they can either warm or burn..."​

So watch what you speak....​

nyc said

 

[paradoX error]

Yuhi aankhon se ansu bahte nahi,
Kisi aur ko hum apna kahte nahi,
Ek tum hi ho jo ruk se gaye ho zindagi mein,
Warna rukne ke liye hum kisi ko kahte nahi…

full time fit !

 

[étudiante]

thank u!!

ur WELCOME

 

[HauteHijabii]

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Dear Sister,​

I hope you are in all health and peace​

I have something to tell you, so listen up please​

Ever since I was young, and just past your knees​

You’d keep swatting me away, like a pack of flees​

You’d stare at me, as if I was some weird disease​

On your forehead, there’d be a permanent crease​

There was always something to tease​

Be it my nose, my ears or the way I sneeze​

And when I’d complain, you’d give me a squeeze​

Roll your eyes and say, ‘I was joking, jeez!’​

But I know it was more and always wanted to release​

You from this misery and put you at ease​

I decided I must let all this stop and freeze​

By having my entire existence abruptly cease​

Maybe now you can live happy and pleased……​

Love,​

Me​

"Words are like fire; they can either warm or burn..."​

So watch what you speak....​

WoW..very touching

 

[AlphaCentauri]

Ankh se aansoo behte rahe
Dil pe zakhm padhte rahe
Shikari shikar karte rahe
Kyun woh yeh nahin sochh lete
Is shikar ko eik hi goli se mar dete?

(these tears keep falling,
this heart keeps wounding,
The hunters keep hunting,
Why dont they think for once
that we'll finish off this hunt with one bullet)

Deep. Very deep. You are a writer who thinks a lot.

 

[Ichigo.Hatake]

Anyone who enjoys reading poetry or even better writes poems? Anyone? =P

Shakespeare ?

 

[étudiante]

Deep. Very deep. You are a writer who thinks a lot.

yeah i think i do...
thanks a lot glad to see ppl notice

 

[Epiphany]

Shakespeare ?

Umm. Doesn't matter.

 

[whitetiger64]

I still ache over that day
When without a word, we had to part
But though you are 1000s of miles away
You're still strong and deep in my heart....

 

[badrobot14]

Ankh se aansoo behte rahe
Dil pe zakhm padhte rahe
Shikari shikar karte rahe
Kyun woh yeh nahin sochh lete
Is shikar ko eik hi goli se mar dete?

(these tears keep falling,
this heart keeps wounding,
The hunters keep hunting,
Why dont they think for once
that we'll finish off this hunt with one bullet)

does this come with a 'sharah' (explaination)...? coz I dun get this (I know I'm dumb in these kind of matters)

 

[étudiante]

does this come with a 'sharah' (explaination)...? coz I dun get this (I know I'm dumb in these kind of matters)

umm... u mean u want me 2 explain the lines?

 

[SalmanPakRocks]

does this come with a 'sharah' (explaination)...? coz I dun get this (I know I'm dumb in these kind of matters)

It means that tears are falling from the eyes and heart is full of wounds that's basically because shikari is the one who made fake promises and keep on hurting her. So she means that why doesn't he just kill her with one bullet? Why keep on hurting her?

 

[badrobot14]

umm... u mean u want me 2 explain the lines?

yes...

 

[whitetiger64]

wow only now i realizd the full meaning....thts soo deeep!! amazing etudiante!!

 

[étudiante]

It means that tears are falling from the eyes and heart is full of wounds that's basically because shikari is the one who made fake promises and keep on hurting her. So she means that why doesn't he just kill her with one bullet? Why keep on hurting her.

u understood it pretty much n good explanation cuz m not good at it thanks!
but i dint mean fake promises, i meant hurting by words or ignoring..... (and........................its ppl- shikari in da plural )

 

[étudiante]

wow only now i realizd the full meaning....thts soo deeep!! amazing etudiante!!

thanks a lot!

yes...

Salman did it for me

 

[AlphaCentauri]

It means that tears are falling from the eyes and heart is full of wounds that's basically because shikari is the one who made fake promises and keep on hurting her. So she means that why doesn't he just kill her with one bullet? Why keep on hurting her?

Yeah, that's what I got too. Why doesn't he kill once and for all, and finish it off.

 

[étudiante]

Yeah, that's what I got too. Why doesn't he kill once and for all, and finish it off.

m SO happy u ppl got my meaning :,)
n btw... i meant metaphorical killing

 

[AlphaCentauri]

m SO happy u ppl got my meaning :,)
n btw... i meant metaphorical killing

It's okay. Did metaphorical reading, I guess. But I really liked this one. You are a good writer. Keep on writing and "copyright" your poems.